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Don't Call Me Lover
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Don't Call Me Lover |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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don't call me lover it's to vague can i hurt you? everyone else does stranger can i step on you? everyone else does welcome mat can i break you? everyone else does i thought you were strong broken shards on the ground p.s: please keep in mind i have a terrible flu and its not working with me today so if this sucks andi dont know it,i blame it on my flu  lol!!! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"don't call me lover it's to vague can i hurt you? everyone else does" wow...this all by itself is powerful...  well done |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
The dangerous thing about doormats is that they animate unexpectedly... Whist someone is wiping off the grime of the day on one, suddenly... and most unexpectedly, it stands vertical and shakes off the filth lodged withing its spiney pile, turning horizontal, the very one last to step upon its surface. Best of luck in your animation. I bet you'll give someone quite a ride in an appropriate hour of your choosing.....LOL I have been this poem.... and animated.  Sherry |
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