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Duncan
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0 posted 2003-11-05 10:18 PM



It was warm and rained today...
your Monday weather, now mine
so I didn’t hurry inside.

I can’t shake you.

Would it surprise you
to know
that I tried?

I tried futility once, too
that didn’t work out either.

.



"I’m here without you baby but your still on my lonely mind
I think about you baby and I dream about you all the time"

3 Doors Down

[This message has been edited by Duncan (11-05-2003 10:23 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-05 10:39 PM


"I can’t shake you.

I can sure understand this

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2 posted 2003-11-05 10:41 PM


and your signature, is the song that plays in my head almost constantly....
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3 posted 2003-11-05 11:57 PM


your Monday weather, now mine
so I didn’t hurry inside.
===========================

ing at you ....


anyone ever tell ya futility looks good on your pen?


less is more when a porch puppy is wearing his heart on his sleeve.

Words break into splinters on the pages I write
If I lost you I don't know what I'd do ...
Burn forever where the flame turns blue

David Gray

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-11-06 09:44 AM


Great write!

Eric

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5 posted 2003-11-06 09:46 AM


Love this Dunc!
May we have more please?
Hugs~  

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Sunshine
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6 posted 2003-11-06 09:59 AM



Excellent.
More.
Soon.

Please?

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-11-06 10:15 AM


Duncan
Liked the symbols, enjoyed.

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8 posted 2003-11-06 10:32 AM


enjoyed
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9 posted 2003-11-06 10:56 AM


Oh Duncan, you are in that space..as I am all the time.
I too love that song, and believe it about says it all.
Sandra

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10 posted 2003-11-06 12:01 PM


Were you walking Chip?

Do you know what a beautiful person you are?

Thank you for being.

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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11 posted 2003-11-06 12:25 PM


Mmm I love this. Your Monday weather, now mine. That just fuels my immagination. Great line.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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12 posted 2003-11-06 05:57 PM


well... Dunc, brevity and the somewhat open ended way of this, suits you well...

and as for me... I enjoyed bud... and always glad to see you write..

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13 posted 2003-11-06 06:16 PM


This was great, but then again so all all of your writes.
Crystal

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14 posted 2003-11-06 06:22 PM


Would love to shake the somethin' out of some someones too...but, like you said, it's futile...

love this

Do songs on the radio sing to all the fools in love?

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