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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2003-11-05 07:23 AM


Catacombs of impression color Sunrise
There hewn languid eyelets fill Wednesday Morning
Syllables float like angels fluttering great architecture
Whispering all secrets fulfilling the contrasts
With ideals in life, love, realities…quatrains endless
Do you see them pout in our absence….my love?
With creative desirable increase, where we look in the
Assuring, unearthing hours of gentle loveliness and gracious light
“Who reads this verse in time to come?” I consider, “with tender appetite?”
It is YOU, and by a part of all this glory we shall live, maybe very poorly
At times, yet with love engrafted to a substance we suffer for
Gaze upon this beauty, this bosom endeared within all hearts, lending her
Lusting force for human minds….souls…and the fire of life
Where oppression is erased, dowsing all sorrow, changing shapes
Eased by the sensual and aloof trespass of love…How amazed!
Oh love…such a sweet bandit you are, excusing my sin and poverty
You embrace that which is precisely whole, blaming nor cursing not
My palm sweats frosty within this air of grace
Enriching my weak heart…calling me yours alone
Loving each and every view which reigns, never to remove
It is our turn to bath, embrace the light of twilight stars
What manner of faith entertains such thoughts?
What single moment gives this kind of grace, energy, eyes that smile and wink?
This all receiving willful taste upon the lips of my soul
Caresses the bosom of images we view together consuming primrose
Dear sweet heart…dearest lover, mine to learn, to trace to know
Lover of silence and harmony, where peace and magic grows
Drowning in my eyes, flowing unto the temporary of losses which
In you are restored…take my mind, into yours and see sights
Let me know your souls desire…I want to know every seed where
Your breath begins…show me, take my hand and lay it upon your heart
So that I may see your thoughts, desires, fears…what happiness arouses you
As one soul, we immerse into a form which sees into immortal life
Drowns within time…into erudition of what lavishes
All those hours, what music but love seeks, we frame into iron warmth
In glorious light, quickly we become with all hearts, all minds
That in beauty subjects to sessions of great fortune, encompassing chorus
Promise, where the muse invents…weaving a boundless sea
This is where I wish to live…and where I press my tongue
Invoking thoughts as dear as your composure…where no one
Feels winter, or the false enslavement of fear
Or drinks of siren tears…but befriends all impression
Despite my simply mind…cleave me to your brethren
Let me be the whole of you, your mistress, sister, friend and wife
Speak to me of your desires; waste no shame….but unto my eyes
Begin, so that I may help to justify the wrong….and touch every line of

Your soul…let no thought remain idle, take my mere hours…
So that you might dine on all sweet forces casting glow
And the welcomed approach of sweet nature & warmth

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-11-05 07:31 AM


Leej,
Me thinks you have an epopee here.
“Who reads this verse in time to come?” I consider, “with tender appetite?”
Excellent. Good morning sweet.

Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
2 posted 2003-11-05 12:07 PM


How very intense!

Lover of silence and harmony, where peace and magic grows
Drowning in my eyes, flowing unto the temporary of losses which
In you are restored ...


Sigh!

Love, Margherita

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2003-11-05 01:17 PM


Syllables float like angels fluttering great architecture
Whispering all secrets fulfilling the contrasts
With ideals in life, love, realities…quatrains endless
Do you see them pout in our absence…

you are an incredible writer..and pack so much into each poem  sometimes it overwhelms me...  I love reading you

M

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