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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-11-04 10:07 PM



Picture by Alan Ayers

* * *

As we climbed love's highest peak
Our love brought us to our knees
I trembled at your touch
We were both so eager to please

In the afterglow of love
You leave me breathless for more
Amongst the remnants of our pleasure
We lay together on the floor

My passion is still burning
Like the embers in the fire
I wait for love to quench me
And satisfy my deep desire

We feel so close to heaven
As we two become one
Making love throughout the night
Until the rising of the sun

In the morning you will leave me
With a smile upon my face
Until again we rendezvous
Same time, same place

* * *

"Love......bittersweet,
irrepressible, loosens the limbs
and I tremble"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
allamericanjoe
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since 2003-10-02
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Iredell county, NC
1 posted 2003-11-05 12:00 PM


Nice!  Erotic, yet romantic and very visual.  You made me blush!  Good write.

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-11-05 04:39 AM




(smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may your heart forever be a songbird singing in your beautiful garden in loves happiness forever! (kiss on cheek) This brought a smile to my heart, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-11-05 12:27 PM


Sue~
Loverly ... loverly ... loverly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
     noles1@totcon.com     

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2003-11-05 12:39 PM


lovely Sue
hugs
M

KristieSue
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5 posted 2003-11-05 12:46 PM


love it...

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

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6 posted 2003-11-08 07:39 PM


Sue:  Very sensual and well written!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

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7 posted 2003-11-09 12:52 PM


big smile
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