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Sabotage
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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Sabotage Love serves no purpose but to blind the mind with temporary illusion; This monotonous game of win/lose strategy serving only to jade an innocence once so powerful. ~ I'm afraid of being disappointed one more time and I cannot trust what appears to be too good to be true. So forgive me if I put a stake in your heart before we kiss. ~ I feel you in me, breast swell safety so I strip my skin, repel the touch remove the vulnerability, detachment. I vanish into nothing invite failure and force the end to rid of your disease. I'm a train wreck and I can't step off the tracks, a volatile vixen unable to vex the valium. ~ Who cares about the remedy anger is the cause deprival of understanding is to conquer, drain the veins. Inner hatred is hard, love is easy and I've always been one for a challenge. I will never allow you to love me your arms cannot fit around the mold in my refusal to change, I am cold closure is overrated. ~ The barriers, the walls are solid strong numb, time heals nothing I let sabotage eat me alive. Melissa Long-Monette [This message has been edited by Honeybee (11-04-2003 09:47 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Yes alot of use have gone through and repeat this pattern..hugs honest and raw as always M |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
the essence of man is that we continually look for new truths from old and proven sources of error. (c) copyright 2003 ecrivan |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
bump.. |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
Melissa, I really enjoy your writes... not that they're happy and cheerful and all that... but they are so provoking... and jaded in the "You don't have to beat me up...Look!!!... I've done it for you!" style. I do like your comparison of fear of rejection as a vampire... although you tend to get confused and "stake the person" instead of the problem. I completely understand. It's not even a case of low self-esteem... just the opposite, sometimes we hold such a low opinion of the opposite sex that we don't even give them a chance to NOT break our heart. Thoroughly enjoyed and library worthy!!! Try mine.... now there's a solution! Sherry |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
I especially can relate to Verse #2. You this into words exceptionally well. Sadie |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I'm a train wreck and I can't step off the tracks, a volatile vixen unable to vex the valium."  (big hugggsssssss) Fist of all, let me say as always though your poetry is sad and heartaching, you always write with the most honest and provoking emotion and I just love the alliteration in the quoted portion above! (sigh) I think soone ror later we all have to malfunction and sabotaging is natural, what's important is that we get out those mechanic books for the soul and work to fix it to 100% efficency as we all need to refresh again and again! God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I'm a train wreck and I can't step off the tracks, a volatile vixen unable to vex the valium. Seems, and I agree....these lines just stand out...and that is saying a lot, because this poem is filled with lines that are superb... |
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