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inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
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0 posted 2003-11-04 09:36 PM



I could grow again,
like a vine,
in extensions of greys,
whites and browns,
like bales of hay
tumbling down
vanity's walls,
I can grow,
in covered up spots,
no one will check me out
at the shore for now,
I can grow,
rampantly
forming balls of wool,
bathed in technicolor dye,
fuscia and mauve,
the patterns of sweaters,
and pipedreams for a
barbershop of baldmen,
I can grow,
while the bears sleep
thru the dawns,
and nuts gather
in the pouches of squirrels,
I'd rather sleep thru it all,
but I could grow,
but then
they'd know,
these braids
beneath my arms,
aren't really blonde
like me,
afterall.............


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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-11-04 09:43 PM


ROTFL!!  You are just too funny Michele!
I was thinking about this just the other day..
No more worry about 'certain' body hair for another year!
But, as you say...the braids under our arms would give away our secrets.
Thanks for the chuckle.
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

inkedgoddess
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2 posted 2003-11-04 09:56 PM


thanks nancy,
glad to entertain.....

Ratleader
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3 posted 2003-11-05 12:34 PM


Silly is good!

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Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

4 posted 2003-11-05 12:51 PM


HAHAHA, LOVE THIS.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-11-05 12:53 PM



Michele, I wish you could have seen the
picture that you painted in my minds eye....
but then again, I guess you did, since you painted it. LOL  
Hugs  
Ethel

ice
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since 2003-05-17
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6 posted 2003-11-05 07:19 AM


Goddesses with "braids" have never turned me off....smiles, enjoyed the read
>>>ice/ford<<<


Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-11-05 07:23 AM


Michele,
Clever rite, enjoyed.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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8 posted 2003-11-05 07:31 AM


You are precious and have me smiling very big and out loud...very much enjoyed this!!
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
9 posted 2003-11-05 07:57 AM


Greetings strong one!
Very witty write. Enjoyed.
You have a keen mind dear woman.
TD

bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
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10 posted 2003-11-05 05:15 PM


Dont let it grow,,,,,bald is beautiful dont you know and not just on women! Creative writing well done
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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11 posted 2003-11-05 05:30 PM


LMFAOOOOOO
OMG Michele . . .
GROWWWWWWWWW
ahahahaha
needed this much
xxoo
beautiful writing too

vandana
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12 posted 2003-11-05 06:50 PM


enjoyed
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