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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-11-04 09:08 AM



Lovers

I want to wake
in the morning
to find you
had missed me
grieving
the tiny death
of your sleeping
rejoicing to
your skin
and a different
breath to take


"Tough times never last...tough people do." carol gardner

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bslicker
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state of mind
1 posted 2003-11-04 09:18 AM



bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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The heart of you
2 posted 2003-11-04 09:19 AM


This is how it should always be.

Thank you.

Peace is the only battle worth waging.
--- Albert Camus

Ericc
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3 posted 2003-11-04 09:45 AM


Beautiful Helen!

Eric

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with you
4 posted 2003-11-04 09:53 AM


"rejoicing to
your skin
and a different
breath to take"


yeah....like that....loved this

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5 posted 2003-11-04 10:06 AM


OneSlick~
Yeppers ... this one knows me too~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-11-04 10:30 AM


So very beautiful!
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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Louisiana
7 posted 2003-11-05 09:50 AM


May I ditto Marge? *G*

Just lovely!

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Georgia
8 posted 2003-11-06 04:20 PM


nice
Toerag
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Ala bam a
9 posted 2003-11-06 04:23 PM


Nice write you good looking sexy thing...wish I was that water you're standing in...caressing your ankles....looking up your dress, desperately trying to splash up further....
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