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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2003-11-04 07:28 AM


I lay on the beach and stare at the future Gull.

Emerald green slender grass blows beside me, as i watch the gull glide by in slow motion.

The gull knows my future, as it flies it takes me on a journey into what i know not.

This kind of certainty comes but once in a lifetime, is all that i truly know of my future.

Through the birds eyes, i see my future, it flies year on year and gives me clarity.

Clarity of love, of life, of what will be.
The strength in my life,in my heart, in my core.

Freedom is everything to me, preciuous to me.
Freedom to feel, to love, to live my life with beauty,kindness and tranquility.

So fly beautiful bird and show me where my heart may take me........

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
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1 posted 2003-11-04 07:40 AM


So fly beautiful bird and show me where my heart may take me........

            elegant poem...
     i think that gull is the your imagination.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-11-06 12:31 PM


My love am I the bird? your future?....I love the style and feel to this....So free..as free as our love...the wind beneath our wings...is eachothers love...your so imaginitive...that s why i love you soo...love

xxxxxxx~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

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In Your Poetic Mind
3 posted 2003-11-06 08:49 AM


Sigh~

this is so tender and beautiful....
Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

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