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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-11-04 12:31 PM


cadence,
the running i
down
coiled spine
twisted in heavy thoughts.
careless for
the break,
i-stuffed
in


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the ass-end of space
1 posted 2003-11-04 12:33 PM


excellent petre
was waitng for you to post..good now i can go to sleep..or attempt it

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with you
2 posted 2003-11-04 12:35 PM


I am not sure exactly what you mean here, but for me, I read it as someone hiding within themself, but not really wanting to be there....just my take on it..... and I liked it
pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
3 posted 2003-11-04 12:55 PM


thx raph, if i knew i would not have made you wait but seriously i'm flattered
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where the wild flowers grow
4 posted 2003-11-04 02:49 AM


Awesome, as always
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-11-04 02:59 AM


sometimes we all need a break
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