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Call of Tears

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GG
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Lost in thought


0 posted 11-03-2003 11:03 PM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for GG


Breathing always makes me think
More then I should,
For every breath brings pain
And oh the sorrows I reclaim.

I cannot understand nor fathom all the things…

The aching it just tears my soul apart,
Compensating for my mind and heart…

The fragile, helpless,
Ever-falling,
Hurting, dying, seeking,
Call of tears.

(this is unorganized, I know.. I wrote it in about ten seconds and my mood isn't to make anything perfect right now. Life is messed up, so this is too...)

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

© Copyright 2003 GG - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space


1 posted 11-03-2003 11:15 PM       View Profile for Aenimal   Email Aenimal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aenimal

actually it's perfectly organized, a fee write ..enjoyed and understood
passing shadows
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2 posted 11-04-2003 02:23 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

I know how it is...one day though, it will end...one day
Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 11-04-2003 09:47 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

I think it is perfect!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

GG
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Lost in thought


4 posted 12-12-2003 12:45 AM       View Profile for GG   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for GG

thanks guys
...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

 
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