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Atrum Mortalis
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0 posted 2003-11-03 09:37 PM



Rage tainted in your Sunshine,
Malice tangled in your Hate shrine,
Rancor tearing in your heart,
Careful what your feeling,
It will rip you apart,

My friend, you didnt deserve to be beaten and battered,
Your heart shouldnt be torn and tattered,
You shouldnt have been defiled,
This rape of your body and soul has me riled to rage,
My friend im here for you,
My friend im sorry for whats happened,
My friend let your tears fall,
My friend remember i am here for you

Sorrow washing in your tears,
Despondancy drenching your fears,
Memories manifesting in your brain,
Let your tears fall,
And your memories wane

A/N: This is for a friend of mine who was recently raped. I know the guy who did it too and i have to go to school with him everyday...not fun.



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Member Rara Avis
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1 posted 2003-11-03 09:40 PM


Heart aching!!!...I hope you/or she turned him in.....feeling this....and so sorry for your friend....
Lauren~


i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

[This message has been edited by Greeneyes (11-03-2003 09:41 PM).]

Kellie_Cantrell
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2 posted 2003-11-03 09:41 PM


This brought tears to my eyes, HOW can people be so CRUEL?. I think you did an awesome job putting your feelings of rage into this poem!

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
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Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-11-03 11:12 PM


A close friend of mine went through this, a few others have been molested and once in high school another was hit.. it took quite a few people to hold me back from the guy at school the next day. What a ******* world..
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