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greco
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since 2003-09-27
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buffalo ny

0 posted 2003-11-03 09:31 PM


dont know if i posted this already sorry if its been done twice

So much pain hidden within
So much anger waiting to be released
Why do these things hurt so badly
All i ever wanted was to be free
But yet something kept me from going
I want to know why it’s me
What have i done wrong
I feel the pain inside taking over
But one light comes through to break the pain
Family is the one thing worth while
Family is what breaks the pain
My family there when i need them
Now i can finally see an end to the pain
I feel the spirit within lifting
The pain is going, but yet always stays
Stays dormant in my mind, soul, and heart
But its ok i feel the need to move on
And finally
It has been broken the curse of Life

By all means marry; if you get a good wife, you'll be happy. If you get a bad one, you'll become a philosopher.~Socrates

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Mary Ann
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since 2003-04-23
Posts 111

1 posted 2003-11-04 06:41 AM


Sincere and moving Thank you for the lovely read....

Best wishes,
~MA~

ambrish
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since 2003-03-27
Posts 257
India
2 posted 2003-11-04 07:42 AM


The pain is going, but yet always stays
Stays dormant in my mind, soul, and heart
But its ok i feel the need to move on

    pain will remain but also caring ones near you to alleviate it,that's life.

              a good poem.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-11-04 01:59 PM


a real good poem!
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