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Deb Lynne
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Where blue skies meet blue ocean

0 posted 2003-11-03 08:36 PM


The moon took on a new brightness
The stars never twinkled so bright
I never loved anyone so completely
I don't remember when I lost sight

Sunrises were dazzling each morning
The rains never dampened my day
Your world became mine so easily
I got caught up in doing it your way

The hours with you were enchanting
For months you were all that I knew
Each time I fell that much harder
I lived each day only for you

When did things become so cloudy
The nights become dark and alone
The emptiness all that I'm feeling
You're here and then suddenly gone...



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with you
1 posted 2003-11-03 08:49 PM


Deb, this aches.....
*hugs* for you

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2003-11-03 09:02 PM


Oh...this hurts!
Excellent write...
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2003-11-04 03:00 AM


seems like a dream sometimes, doesn't it?
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