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I Will Weep For You

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Gina Culliney
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I will weep for you,
but never in mortal tears.

I will weep for you, but not
inside this house of mirrors.

Seek my tears, that I have shed
for you, in the gentle morning
rain.

Let each rain drop wash over you,
slowly, until you are cleansed from
all of your pain.

I will not weep for you in the
order of all womankind.

Look only for my tears, I've
shed for you, gathered in the
streams, lakes, and seas.

Remember them with tenderness
when you think oft of me.
© Copyright 2003 Gina Culliney - All Rights Reserved
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Nice writing Gina...James
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Let each rain drop wash over you,
slowly, until you are cleansed from
all of your pain.

How very tender... I like this so much! *S*
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into the sea
the tears softened amid those that came before them
very nice imges
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beautiful write Gina
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I relate well
Susan Caldwell
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I enjoyed this very much!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

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Gina~
Such a very gentle read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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Thank you all for your kind and honest words!
 
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