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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-11-03 02:24 PM



Transitions




How many sultry summers
lend themselves to fall,
caught up in a fond farewell
waving goodbye to all

Sun is riding the crest once more
trapped one last final day
within the leaf, before the wind
has its final say

Wondering how many feet will travel
along this old dirt path
before the top is oil-slicked black,
and feels a weighty wrath

Thank God for the vision before me
of a view where time stands still
for the chance to seek the valley
or climb up top the hill

And thank you for the blue skies
to remind me when it’s gray
that I am not forsaken
for they’ll be back, someday



Now the mists are closing in
Old man winter is nearing nigh
and the sun will soon be hiding
only to peek in the by and by.

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (11-03-2003 02:24 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-11-03 02:32 PM


old man winter has "hit" MN today ice snow and rain.....ACK...lol but what a beautiful transition.....lovely Karilea~
Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

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2 posted 2003-11-03 02:36 PM


Lovely Karilea..yes, transitions..
Love the way you see things.
Teach me how to do this...please.
~Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2003-11-03 02:38 PM


beautiful Karilea..can you believe it is over 80 here on the east coast...another day or two of it to come..

yet I do love the snow..when it comes
M

IrishDreamer
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4 posted 2003-11-03 02:39 PM


Both the picture and the words are beautiful they paint a wonderful picture.  This picture looks so much like the road I grew up near and miss so much when I'm stuck in town.  Thanks for the memories.

~Angie~

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