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littlewing
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0 posted 2003-11-03 01:49 PM



within this hushed silence
I heard myself sing
the sky bellowed shrieking
caw of nightengale I
lay down my heart, softly
within your palm
and you took of it,
smiling as you did
giving back to me . . . your own
setting it upon the one
which now lay in your hand
molding them like clay
an artist's touch
until they were
but one work of art
to be brandished and set
in the finest of galleries

© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
Susan Caldwell
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1 posted 2003-11-03 02:01 PM


"molding them like clay
an artist's touch
until they were
but one work of art"

And the rest of us stand in silence admiring the pure beauty of it..


"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-11-03 02:15 PM


The "medium" is far beyond medium!

Lovin' hugs and knowing smiles,
Linda

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-11-03 02:16 PM


And might I add, that I love that hint of the mysterious in your new pic!


rambling_words
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4 posted 2003-11-03 02:20 PM


How unique, I liked.

John

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5 posted 2003-11-03 02:39 PM


I
lay down my heart, softly
within your palm ''''
This is so very tender-- you have a beautiful expression about you... hugsss

Lauren~

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-11-03 02:43 PM


So tender...so love-filled..I am in awe.
You both are so blessed.
~Hugs to you pretty lady~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-11-03 06:53 PM


Susan My goodness . . .
not in awe . . .  but thank you

Linda you are so sweet thank you
that mysterious I like too
*smile*  far from medium, yes

Hey John, Welcome to PIP
sorry I missed your entrance
thank you

Lauren, thank you so much, so sweet

Hugs to YOU pretty lady

thank you Nancy

Thanks guys
xxoo

wranx
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8 posted 2003-11-03 07:19 PM


The molding of two hearts into this...

Possible, only if both are pliable...yielding to the other.

Just a hint of mystery? Hmmm

Love you!
Ed

Martie
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9 posted 2003-11-03 08:11 PM


Sue...how beautiful this coupling!
passing shadows
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10 posted 2003-11-04 03:04 AM


medium well done
vlraynes
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11 posted 2003-11-04 03:26 AM



A masterpiece in the making...smile

This is so very beautiful, Sue
I absolutely love it

Hugs and much love...

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

LeeJ
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12 posted 2003-11-04 06:29 AM


beatifully written and expressed
Margherita
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13 posted 2003-11-04 06:36 AM


When LOVE is the artist the creation is perfect .... as you show with your wondrous words.
I love you. Margherita

Dark Angel
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14 posted 2003-11-04 08:08 AM


Beautiful and tender.





Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


littlewing
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15 posted 2003-11-04 08:57 AM


Baby? they are/have been pliable
it is your hands I sopeak of
the artist . . .
thank you

yes mystery lol
love you too

Thank you Martie

HA! Dix awesome response thank you

Hugs and Love to you,my sister
thank you so much, Vic

Thank you Lee  

Margherita, so very true love you
thank you

Thank you Maree

Thanks guys
xxoo

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16 posted 2003-11-04 04:37 PM




(smiles) Upon this Passions gallery you sure have an entire south wall with wonderful works of art to be displayed in forever exhibition! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Marge Tindal
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17 posted 2003-11-04 05:25 PM


LittleWing~
This is as gentle a read as I'll see this day~
Delicately portrayed ... enjoyed immensely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
     noles1@totcon.com     

JamesMichael
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18 posted 2003-11-04 06:31 PM


Enjoyed...James
vandana
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19 posted 2003-11-04 06:42 PM


enjoyed
PouringJewels
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20 posted 2003-11-07 02:41 AM


"One work of art" Do you know what this means? Soul mates!
ambrish
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21 posted 2003-11-07 03:01 AM


beautiful enjoyed it.
littlewing
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22 posted 2003-11-08 03:37 AM


Noah you always bump my stuff ,
thank you so so much

aww Marge that was so sweet of you
thank you

Thank you James

Thank you V!

ahhh Julia yes yes yes indeed
FINALLY
thank you

Thank you am . .  nice to see you
reading me

Thanks guys
xxoo

inkedgoddess
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23 posted 2003-11-09 02:02 PM


molding them like clay
an artist's touch
until they were
but one work of art
to be brandished and set
in the finest of galleries

beautiful words, and sentiment.......
no need to set it in stone,
set it in a pliable substance for now and let it grow and breathe along the way........
stone is stone, love is love and the two
dont jive for me, at least, anyhow........
feel the floyd, feel the love

littlewing
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24 posted 2003-11-10 12:02 PM


Michele, I am finally . . .
feeling the floyd  *smile*
thank you
xxoo

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