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I Wish I Knew the Words To Say
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I Wish I Knew the Words To Say |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I feel this feeling like my hearts just sunk. Now I feel a feel of tears coming to my eyes. Squeezing my eyes shut, and wiping tears away I wish I knew what words to say. Wanting to just sit next to you, quiet Just soak in your presence next to me. Feel your hand slip in mine not a word spoken. When I think of this, comfort is what I know It's the knowing you are there. No words needed. No explanations Just a knowing that you care. No promises made None required. I wish I knew the words to say to show how much you are admired. Nothing else need be said Just to sit next to you for a while For this. Just for this. I would travel endless miles. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have written this many times in many ways... nice M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Terri, you have such a big beautiful heart |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Yep, I'm agreeing with Dixie on this.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely lovely..such longing.. And at times words are not necessary are they? Just to be near that special person...is enough. Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Terri, you have said it perfectly. Ahh ... to sit in silence and KNOW! Love, Margherita |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I agree you've such a big and wonderful heart. It's a pleasure to see. Crystal |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Seeking touch, of heart, soul and skin... Yes, I know of this...  "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
When one is able to sit in companionable silence next to one whom they love, no words need to be spoken. This was such an achingly tender write, Terri. ~ Wishing true happiness for you, Dear Sharer of Roses, Loving hugs, Linda |
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rambling_words Junior Member
since 2003-10-29
Posts 44London, Ontario, Canada |
I wish I knew the words to say how much I liked this, I feel this way very often and it was nice to know that I am not alone. John |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lovely -- sometimes words are best said with silence....hugsssss Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you to all of you...  nakdthoughts- It's true. This is written in so many hearts. Getting it on the outside sometimes helps. passingshadow--Thanks girlie..Hugs to you. Big ol' edder--thank you for the read and comment. Enchantress--So true. Just to feel his presence would be enough. Margherita--feels safe that way. Angelblueyes--Thank you. That was very sweet. I appreciate that. Susan Caldwell--You got it. All of those. The touch. The scent of them. The touching of souls without a word spoken. They are out there. It's just finding them. Endless search 'til that one that is the one. Earth angel--Thank you. It is an ache. Yes it is. rambling_words--no you aren't alone. Greeneyes--just feels like comfort. Love, Terri~  [This message has been edited by SharaRose (11-03-2003 11:07 PM).] |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Terri, I hope all is well? Take care of YOU, my friend. and more Ethel |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Love ya girl for thinking of me..many hugs. Love, Terri~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, I don't know how I missed this one, dearest friend, I'm sorry! (big angel hugs) This is sooooooo beautiful and reflects your giving and compassionate heart, sweet friend, you know just how to make others feel good and special, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Terri, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth I can see the sun set and I perceive ***Live*** [This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-20-2003 10:25 PM).] |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thank you Noah, but I'm not Suthern so I don't know if this was intended for me. If it was, I appreciate the comment. Love, Terri~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely..indeed...James |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Terri, I love this. Yes, just knowing someone is there next to you is enough at times. Though quite difficult for a writer to admit...indeed, words do not express all. Smiles and Hugs for you from me! Patricia |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Thanks to you both...  James Micheal-- I appreciate your sentiments. That was very nice. Patricia-- I know what you mean. It's not easy to say that sometimes when you don't know what the other would say. Love, Terri~ |
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