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To Feel The Knowing |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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A caring message I received while rewinding my senses trying to bring them alive, on this an unseasonably warm November morning. Pressure builds up as time wears down and I try so hard not to step on those cracks that will bring me down even faster than those wrong turns I continuously make. I am that weeping willow of yesteryear. The one whose branches drooped beyond healthy, being eaten away by twists of nature. I wish to express love and happiness and all the fluff that others in the poetry world think should be obsolete but for me would bring the real back into my life. I want to collect rainbows and sunsets and catch dreams to dress my nakdthoughts to feed me with tomorrows to soak me in the warmth of vanilla and to candle me with hope to be seen through another's eyes to know and feel the knowing.... I wish for tears to taste sweet again and my heart to know peace and to have a storyteller by my bed with touching words to arrest the dark. Yes, a caring message I received, friendship's sharing, not often enough but enough to release some aching so that I may once again dance in the arms of my words... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
I loved this. Filled with so much heart. Baring heart, and soul, and I really loved the mention of the storyteller. I have always dreamed of that. Just beautiful this is.  Love, Terri~  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Terri...it's actually pretty pitiful... M |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"I wish for tears to taste sweet again" Oh that line...perfect. "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I love the title...and enjoyed the verse. Thank you, Maureen... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, One of your better writes, enjoyed  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Susan, Sunshine and Seymour...my three s's for the day thank you for your kind responses...  M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sometimes we have to take what we can get sometimes we don't |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is great.  Crystal |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
and sometimes we just dream... I will never take just what I can get... I am selfish that way...I want the best for me, not to ever settle. Thanks Dixie... M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (11-03-2003 12:47 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Crystal I am just trying to keep an open heart and mind today..sometimes tough for me to do, lately. M |
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rambling_words Junior Member
since 2003-10-29
Posts 44London, Ontario, Canada |
This is very good. John |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
"I wish to express love and happiness and all the fluff that others in the poetry world think should be obsolete but for me would bring the real back into my life." Love and happiness and all the fluff are far from obsloete. Be not discouraged by the naysayers. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
M, you are heart, soul, and talent!...  God bless you, Dear One!  EA |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WynterGal~ You know that the caring goes both ways~  You have sooooooo much to offer ... and you know that I know that~ AND ... I know that you know that when the time is right ... and it will come ... you will know just what do do with your heart~ Wishing that you could make the time to come visit, yet knowing it can't be now ... but maybe when things lighten up a little for you? Hey, that's gonna happen too ! Love you, my friend~ Thank you for being there for me too~ Means the world to me sweet lady~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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