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ambrish
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0 posted 2003-11-03 06:16 AM


A lonely kite,
In the eastern sky,
Kite is alone,
Sky is vacant, the empty sky.

Riding on the wind,
Kite is floating, is drifting,
Aimlessly heading somewhere,
God knows where, nowhere, nowhere.

A vagrant kite, in lonely sky,
Clouds passing by, passing by,
A lost kite, kite is astray,
In enormous sky, blank sky.

Wind is blowing, is flowing,
Kite is sailing, is roving,
Where it has to go, somewhere,
May be nowhere, nowhere,
That’s why it is drifting,
With the wind turning n twisting.


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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-11-03 06:48 AM


nice free image floating by
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2 posted 2003-11-03 12:48 PM


a lonely write...I know the feeling
angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-11-03 12:53 PM


I interpret this several different ways.
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4 posted 2003-11-03 01:45 PM



Please pull me back! Your poem was so realistic that I felt as though I was truly that kite, aloft and adrift in the wild blue yonder!

Wonderfully descriptive writing!


EA

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5 posted 2003-11-04 06:19 PM


Nice descriptive writing...seems a shame that the Taliban in Afganistan would not allow the people the joy of flying a kite...James
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6 posted 2003-11-04 06:44 PM


Ambrish~

'A vagrant kite, in lonely sky'

I do like the idea of 'a vagrant kite'~

Your words are aloft~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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7 posted 2003-11-04 06:44 PM


enjoyed this
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