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Margherita
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0 posted 2003-11-02 05:27 PM






Tears of the soul


Who cried those tears
that fell from the place unknown
where we all spring from?
Is there someone up there
who yearns for us to
to return?

Explorers sent on their way,
wrapped in crystal tears,
in free fall, destination Earth.
Sparkling rainbows
displayed to welcome in beauty
the new souls.

Do you remember the view?
All seemed so perfect and new.
We touched in awe
and mixed our colors
with every caress of the sun,
just before losing hold.

And then as simple raindrops
we were scattered here and there,
to burst in a place to put roots,
to grow and to love.
From time to time
a flash of memories
crosses my heart.

I long for your touch
for your colors to mix with mine.
I stand at the ocean
and feel its attraction.
Countless tears of souls
yearn to be kissed
by the sun once more.

Waiting to be raised
to where we came from
with a halt on the rainbow
to behold beauty divine
to say goodbye for just a while,
to merge and to be one,
to know we are Home.
Love, Margherita

© Copyright 2003 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
SharaRose
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1 posted 2003-11-02 05:32 PM


Wow What a beautiful thing this is and the picture really touched me. Very nice! Thanks for sharing this for it's beauty, but for what it shares from a caring heart. WOW again.
Love,
Terri~

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-11-02 06:50 PM




(sigh) Oh Margherita, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this too made me cry as it is so heartfelt and compassionate! (kiss on cheek) Your heart always rains with love sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Margherita, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Enchantress
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3 posted 2003-11-02 06:55 PM


"
Do you remember the view?
All seemed so perfect and new.
We touched in awe
and mixed our colors
with every caress of the sun,
just before losing hold."

Absolutely beautiful!  Especially love the above verse.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Ericc
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4 posted 2003-11-02 07:25 PM


Beautiful...simply beautiful.

Love,
Eric

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2003-11-02 07:28 PM


Margherita,
A lovely, lovely write.

passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-11-03 03:25 AM


gosh I'm in a mood...
Margherita
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7 posted 2003-11-03 06:02 AM


Thank you my friends for reading and kindly commenting... I had this "teary" vision and tried to put it into words ....the soul sometimes travels in strange places and lets us know through intuition.

Love and hugs. Margherita

ps I am sorry that I can't stay here as much as I used to for another couple of months ... Whenever I will have an opportunity I will join you.

Aenimal
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8 posted 2003-11-03 08:38 AM


Missed your writing you always remind us to look for the beauty in life despite its ugliness
Abbraci

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2003-11-03 10:54 AM


Absolutely stunning write and the pic suites this so well.  Inspirational and uplifting.
HopeS
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10 posted 2003-11-03 11:32 AM


I long for your touch
for your colors to mix with mine.
I stand at the ocean
and feel its attraction.
Countless tears of souls
yearn to be kissed
by the sun once more.

every verse was excellently expressed , but I related to this verse , I also have an affinity with the sea
Hope

Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2003-11-03 12:09 PM


I really tried to find one stanza that I favored and just couldn't..I loved it all and sit in awe of the words you have written..

Susan

Oh..and I am saving this to!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

angelblueyes
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12 posted 2003-11-03 12:12 PM


This is beautiful.It speaks of such sensitivity that it touches the heart.
Crystal

Sunshine
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13 posted 2003-11-03 02:36 PM


Is there someone up there
who yearns for us to
to return?

~*~

Definitely, Margherita...
and all I can say is, thank goodness
He is so very forgiving...

Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-11-03 05:08 PM


Dear Margherita, this poem is the perfect example of why I have missed both your poetry and you!

Loving hugs,
Linda

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2003-11-03 06:25 PM


Very nice...James
littlewing
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16 posted 2003-11-03 07:13 PM


Margherita . . . what a beautiful
way to look at this , my goodness
YES coming home indeed . . .

Is there someone up there
who yearns for us to
to return?

YES indeed and I await that day
with a smile
This is beautiful
xxoo

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