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rambling_words
Junior Member

since 2003-10-29

Posts 44
London, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-11-02 02:29 PM

Colours of the setting sun bleed into the horizon
Reds and purples brushed onto a canvas of blue
Stars emerge to dust the dirt from the day
Then fall in exploding fireworks of a summer evening
Suddenly all the pain is gone from inside my heart
Everything makes sense through these eyes
Cast on a city of ghostly shadows
Haunting whispers of voices long forgotten blow in the breeze
That stirs the blinds in my windows
Open and closing the view that heals my body
Blistered feet and aching legs
Miles traveled to the edge of the Thames and back
Water rushing over the dam
Crashing silently below on the other side
Scattering bugs into the July evening
I wipe the sweat off my neck
Focused on the tranquil nature before me
Lost in my thoughts of nothingness
Emptying my heart of all love.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-11-02 02:35 PM

Very beautiful imagery

Cold hands means a warm heart

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-11-02 02:41 PM

Seek it again, and again 'til you find it. Never give up....it sustains. Never ever give up. Sending a hug.

Love,
Terri~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2003-11-02 02:43 PM

(big hugggssssssssss) Yes, do everything above EXCEPT on the last line, sweet friend, for love is such a precious thing to throw away and love is what brings harmony to ones heart! (sad sigh) I send angel healing hugs, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (11-02-2003 02:43 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-11-03 04:41 AM

you sound like me

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

5 posted 2003-11-03 12:56 PM

"Open and closing the view that heals my body"

Loved that line!!

Well done!

"if you won't let me fall for you
then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you"
~Dido~

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

6 posted 2003-11-03 12:58 PM

Never give up.For it's there for you to have and you'll have it soon.

Crystal

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2003-11-03 01:39 PM

The last line seems rather incongruous to me as the lines leading up to it show a man who sees and appreciates the beauty of nature and his heart is brimming with love for it!

Perhaps a disappointing love relationship drained some of the love from your heart, but you still have a whole lot of loving going on in that heart of yours!

Loving, healing hugs,
EA

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