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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York

0 posted 2003-11-02 02:27 PM


Snow glistening on their tongues,
in the middle of a cold december night.
and the christmas tree,
decorated for a day so bright,
the child's eyes light up to see,
colorful arrangements, under the christmas tree.

A child's eyes,
see differently.
blocked by an innocent twilight.
they play from sun up to sun down.


                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
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MorninGlory
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since 2003-08-30
Posts 175
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-11-02 02:33 PM


This brings back such memories of when my girls were young, so thrilled with the approaching season, while I poured through shops and delighted in the smells and sounds of Christmas. That was always my favorite time of year, and I think this was the reason for the joy, watching them, innocent, happy, anticipation ruled the day! Great piece!

~ becky

rambling_words
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since 2003-10-29
Posts 44
London, Ontario, Canada
2 posted 2003-11-02 02:33 PM


It is almost time to think about christmas again. How true are your words.

John

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3 posted 2003-11-02 02:34 PM




(smiles) Oh Kellie, I love children sooooooo much and believe that in many ways, they are wiser than grown-ups, for innocence is the key to harmony and peace I believe! (big hugggssssssss) If we can look through a child's eyes, true joy can fill all our hearts, yay, God Bless You for this lovely write, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kellie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2003-11-02 06:02 PM


Beautiful, Kelly!
Yes children's eyes see differently! We should be able to see like children again.
Pure magic.
Love, Margherita

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