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The Other |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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The Other she is sometimes so full of another color like a season she searches true the minutes capturing them as they slip sand and wash into the wealth of the moon and more become listen to the crashing of her tide like forest at night in creep up with the leaves waiting for the dew all crawl and rustle she hears one grain of sand shift soft relief she is wealth of moon and more a ramble a tree stands with her in the tall of stretch and scurry things twig her toe in walk along and jam her sway along the way of best light is such verve and frequently captured by the chain that pulls her to design the falling of the magic fills the porous and brings her to a fast focus align listen can you hear the winter coming across the skin she feels it with her warm and waits beneath the waning light of autumn for a storm to nudge her dormant ions ------ from 11/6/02 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Martie, I jsut love it when you write about nature...I love it when you write about anything  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
WOW! I'll be tucking this one into my library, to savor all year long. Absolutely beautiful imagery and metaphors. |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Fantastic, Martie. So glad you put this back on, as I had missed it, and this is one that one wouldn't want to miss...very gentle smile |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Grabbing a coat, obviously Winter is on the way....for Martie says so..... You write seasons so well, all of them... Envy will get me NOTHINQUE!!! |
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Marty Baird Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 90Georgia, U.S. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
listen to the crashing of her tide like forest at night in creep up with the leaves waiting for the dew all crawl and rustle she hears one grain of sand shift soft relief I could get lost in lines like these... so very beautiful. *S* As is your new picture... I love it! *S* |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, your gorgeous poetry always makes me smile as it murmurs all the symphonies of nature and the simple beauties of life, yay! (kiss on cheek) May winter comfort all the children like a tamed young fawn sipping from a creek, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is a wonderfully descriptive poem. I like your new picture. You have a great smile! |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
you do have a way with words, wonderfully written. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very impressive! The Other gently flows. Love, Margherita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Martie girl! Love this and the new pic!! Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A timely repost...and one I remember very well. Thank you, Martie! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
amazing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie That blew me away. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
astounding |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
wonderful images of nature here - you write with insights the rest of us only get when we read your poetry - Paul |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
i wish i could write something so "natural" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"she is sometimes so full of another color" ....and her poetry is so full of vivid imagery and movement.... Martie, your wordsongs are almost without equal. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> ______________Ratleader______________ [This message has been edited by Ratleader (11-03-2003 03:47 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God Martie I saw so much here not only a changing season far far from it My goodness I saw someone traveling withint those stars too *smile* I do love your picture I dont think I told you that on your last write xxoo |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Fantastic Martie, thank you for reposting... I do believe I missed it. Maree fate is not just |
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