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Soft Touch
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ After the fire and rain collides you are a breath of fresh air blowing through my hair. Autumn leaves scatter at my feet I feel you there in the wind surrounding my all. I know the sound of your whispers and I hear you clearly eluding all distortions. A bouquet of roses sits on my window sill arranged just so in a bud vase tending to my love on display. As each petal opens falling all over for you again and again and again. The way it's always been and was meant to be forever, so soft to the touch. ~*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"As each petal opens falling all over for you again and again and again. The way it's always been and was meant to be forever, so soft to the touch." OH..so beautiful Bluesy!! Love the gentle touch of your pen. Hugs~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...So pretty this, and you! Hugs! |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
After the fire and rain collides you are a breath of fresh air blowing through my hair. Bluesygirl, you touched my heart with this lovely piece. Into my library it goes. hugs to you, Chris  Let your life lightly dance on the edges of Time like dew on the tip of a leaf. -Tagore |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Must tell of a garden of roses, all of different types, on the via Foro Imperiale,in Rome...I think of it now and then, I once sat in there with a book to read...nice write Martin |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nancy~ I'm taking lessons from you....doncha know? Thank you sweets. Martie~ Ok then, how 'bout this being my pretty in pink reply? Thank you so much Martie girl~ It was one of those picture perfect days after the rain. The bluest kind that washes away the gray. (oh my hair, my hair) Glad you you liked this, thank you Chris. I'm sitting here trying to picture the garden. It's nice to know I conjured up such a lovely thought. Thank you very much wordwizard~ |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lori~ Isnt it AMAZING what a touch will do?? you have great inspiration....lovin the smile....hugsss lady blue...  Lauren~ i carry your heart with me |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Pretty in pink, yea well, it's a nice night out anyway. Thanks Lady Lauren~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
No, Bluesy - don't ever wear pink! Blue is the colour of the sky and we're designed therein to fly! Well, okay then if you must but lean more towards the darker shades for red is the colour of love and red the fire within. Sorry but it is Sunday and I'm known to say strange things on a Sunday. Keep burning your words into hearts! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very pretty |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you are a breath of fresh air blowing through my hair. I want some of that...let's make a pact...a once a year visit...something to look forward to love ya Lor, M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is just lovely, Blues lady! *S* |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A softly romantic write Blues...enjoyed. believe in what your heart feels... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bluesy? for some odd reason these lines struck me: A bouquet of roses sits on my window sill arranged just so in a bud vase tending to my love on display. maybe because when I ever do get flowers My God I am so proud of them ' as you should be *smiling* tell me this is so please Tweets xxoo |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
well done, lady. well done. this looks good on you. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made my heart smile as I am so happy for you and wish for your heart to forever be touched with rosepetals! (kiss on cheek) This is mesmerizing, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Magicmystery Senior Member
since 2002-02-13
Posts 821Windsor, Ontario, Canada |
----------------------------- I feel you there in the wind surrounding my all. ----------------------------- and I hear you clearly eluding all distortions. ----------------------------- How did I miss this one!?!?! Those words just go together so well.... I particularly like those lines above. They speak as if they are coming from my own heart. It is a gift to know that someone else holds the same allusions. Very well done! Sherry  [This message has been edited by Magicmystery (11-03-2003 01:48 PM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, dear Bluesy One, you truly do have a "Soft Touch" to your writing. Each stanza could stand on its own. Simply lovely. This is as soft as a pink rose petal and ever so sweet.  ~ May love always be as gentle and comforting in your life... Linda |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you everyone, but it's just a front, simply because I want to write happy and let it be. Hugs and all that good stuff. |
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