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C_ROK06
Junior Member
since 2003-10-23
Posts 49


0 posted 2003-11-01 05:55 PM


You tell me over and over again,
That I’m awesome
That you love me
Every time you say this
I smile
But deep inside
I don’t understand why

How can this be true?
Don’t you know all of what I’ve been through?
You know all I’ve said
All that I’ve done
All the sins I have committed
Yet you seem to forget them
Every single one
Why?

I don’t understand this
How can anyone love one such as me?
You stick by your words
So flawlessly

Yes it’s true
I do love you
But I don’t deserve you
You deserve much better

Better than you think
Better than you could hope
Better than you would dream
And that one is not me
No
Not me
Oh how I wish it were
But you deserve much better



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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-11-01 11:27 PM


Guess it depends on what side of the fence you're on!  

Personally, I don't buy that line!
It's a tad too tired for my taste.
But you sure did write it out awful nice.

Welcome to Passions~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-11-02 04:03 AM


give yourself some credit

others see what you cannot

Mary Ann
Member
since 2003-04-23
Posts 111

3 posted 2003-11-03 07:16 AM


I think when you love someone, it's natural to feel unworthy of them...but that you feel that way at all suggests to me that you DO deserve them......give yourself some measure of the importance that person regards in you

Hugs,
~MA~

SharaRose
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~
4 posted 2003-11-03 10:26 AM


I always find myself saying we don't see ourselves the way other people do. I heard these words from someone one time, and all I could say is you are totally my joy. What he saw in himself obviously wasn't what I saw at all. Give her credit for knowing what she wants, because I've been there, and done that, and ultimately his thoughts about himself won out, and maybe he didn't want to be with me anyway, but he's still unhappy thinking the thoughts about himself that he does. He still lost in that battle with himself. I also think sometimes guys use that as a way to get out of a relationship they don't want. That's also another loss, because it was ended in a dishonest way.
Love,
Terri~


[This message has been edited by SharaRose (11-03-2003 10:29 AM).]

KeEbLeR_eLf06
New Member
since 2003-10-24
Posts 5

5 posted 2003-11-05 12:14 PM


;.;  OMG!!!  Vicki!  WHO DO YOU FEEL THIS WAY ABOUT?!?!  gosh!  dag nabbit!  i hate to see you feel this way!  if its a guy i'll kiss his ass!  haha, seriously, i hope you know that all of us love you no matter what!  you could have been helping a senior citizen across the street and then ditched her when the srteet sign said stop for the final time and we would have understood!  (sorry for stupid example)  anyways...^_^  we love you for how you treat each and everyone of us...you listen to us and share to much with us and you never ask for anything in return...that is selfless love gurly and i hope you foget the past...those are so long ago or even if their current, forget them!  we all make mistakes vicki, but we all learn from them, even if their life shattering to think about.  been there and done that...look at what you have around you gurl so much love because we love you for who you are, not what you have done.

"itz not wut u have in ur life, itz who u hav dat countz"

KeEbLeR_eLf06
New Member
since 2003-10-24
Posts 5

6 posted 2003-11-05 12:15 PM


i meant KICK his ass!!  HAHA!  not kiss!!!  :P
SuperGlueRyan
Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 45
Possum Kingdom
7 posted 2003-11-05 01:10 AM


Wow.

I'm currently in a situation with someone who feels the same way that you do. I feel that if this person that loves you knows your past and still loves you, then perhaps you're putting too much weight on yourself. If this person loves you then let them help you carry that weight, as I'm sure that they want to.
If I didn't know better, your words would make me think that you are the person that I love, whom has trouble understanding my love.
~Ryan

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