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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-11-01 05:25 PM



Looking Up



I would probably not trip so much
If I were to look down
More often
But I choose to look up
To see the sun set on geese in flight

Listening to their cries
Of encouragement
To those who follow

When I look up,
I see more than just blue skies,
I feel more than the sun on my face
I hear more
Than the wind in my ears ~

Sometimes,
It’s just easier to say thank you

When looking up.



© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Duncan
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1 posted 2003-11-01 05:35 PM


"I would probably not trip so much
If I were to look down
More often
But I choose to look up
To see the sun set on geese in flight"

Hi Kari...just the thought made me smile.  I watch them too.  One of the reasons I love Autumn.     

Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-11-01 06:08 PM


"Sometimes,
It’s just easier to say thank you

When looking up."

How true this is!!
Beautiful lady...
Hugs YOU!

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

Magnus
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3 posted 2003-11-01 06:15 PM


Yes,  but you will never see that Twenty
that was lying on the ground before I found
it.  Excellent write KJ,  good thoughts
and a beautiful pic to boot!!

vandana
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4 posted 2003-11-01 06:17 PM


nice write
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2003-11-01 06:20 PM


Smiling at you honey.....
It’s just easier to say thank you

Amen.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


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6 posted 2003-11-01 06:29 PM


Sometimes,
It’s just easier to say thank you

When looking up'''


So simple, yet it speaks sooo much....

hugssss lady


Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

Mistletoe Angel
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7 posted 2003-11-02 04:31 PM






(smiles) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I am waiting for those Flying V's to come soaring through the Colorado skies as there truly is a symbol of trinity within it all! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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8 posted 2003-11-03 04:38 AM


thanks for the reminder
ambrish
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9 posted 2003-11-03 05:14 AM


insightful.
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