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Open Poetry #29

details of life

joan
New Member

since 2003-10-30

Posts 4
Estonia

0 posted 2003-11-01 12:41 PM

A cup of tea,
no sugar please!
Yes, it's just you and me,
and one of us has to leave.

I'm driving through the city
I think it's raining.
You close your eyes out of pity.
Sorry, no rain, just me crying.

I can still feel you,
still feel the meaning,
but there is nothing else to do
and so I drink my tea
and you see me leaving.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-11-01 01:20 PM

(big hugggsssssss) You truly have captivated a slice of life too well, dearest friend, one always has to go and this happens way too much, when if giving and sharing and settling ones differences can be darjeeling tea! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joan, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Kellie_Cantrell
Senior Member

since 2002-05-22

Posts 1667
New York

2 posted 2003-11-01 02:00 PM

Dearest Joan-

Your poem "Details of life" if incredible. The way it flows makes me feel lifted up. Very beautifully written!

Love,
xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

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