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Happy Poet
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0 posted 2003-11-01 11:44 AM



she hasn't forgotten
feelings of anticipation
as the candles burn
to her astonishment
she begins to feel sad
and she won't believe
it's all over

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1 posted 2003-11-01 12:50 PM




(big hugggssssssss) This is a sad but beautiful poem, sweet friend, I only wish anticipation can always be monitored somehow and then we can believe far more when waiting! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

BluesSerenade
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2 posted 2003-11-01 10:43 PM


It's not judgment time,
but it's a close second.

Saddness can be all consuming,
only if we let it be.
(oh yea, take it from me)     

Your poem is heartfelt, HP.
*Much enjoyed*

Pilgrimage
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3 posted 2003-11-02 09:56 PM


Sometimes it's over before it starts. At least she can remember the good times.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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4 posted 2003-11-03 03:36 AM


you know me, don't you?

yeah, this hit home

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5 posted 2003-11-03 04:01 PM


I hope she never forgets -- and never regrets. Life's too short for either.

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Mystic One
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6 posted 2003-11-04 12:56 PM


Very Nice
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7 posted 2003-11-04 04:21 PM


HappyPoet~
Those feelings of anticipation are shared by many~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
     noles1@totcon.com     

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