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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-11-01 05:58 AM


Sorrow shed like tears
you know
don't you?
not really
but,
you know

so sad have we
become, when we
know
and do nothing

I will suffer
for you
while you wonder

and cash in all
my chips
and call it
a loss

© Copyright 2003 Jason Lyle - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-11-01 07:43 AM


it is a loss, yes, when nothing is done to change the scenery
Ericc
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2 posted 2003-11-01 10:04 AM


Very creative and telling much in a few well chosen words.
Eric

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-11-02 11:41 AM


Jason?

so sad have we
become, when we
know
and do nothing

mann ooh I know but?
have you tried the tables . . .
maybe one more round?
*smile*
xxoo

pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
4 posted 2003-11-02 12:26 PM


creative and original
passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2003-11-02 12:34 PM


this hit home
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6 posted 2003-11-02 03:24 PM




(big hugggsssssssss) You can win...you can win simply by calling tis form of gambling quits and gamble only with your ambitions! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is poignant, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Jason, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Gina Culliney
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since 2003-03-08
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7 posted 2003-11-03 05:53 PM


Reflecting or do you need that "lucky ace,"
have it handy if ya need it.  Good write as usual, Darkling!

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