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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-10-31 03:20 PM

mechanic
and lifeless
if it were
a matter of choice
i'd have taken my last
long ago
nestled somewhere between
the afterglow
of a fantastic lay
and the arms
of a deep sleep
they continue instead
lifeless and
mechanic
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i'm gonna go slip into a light coma now..nite, mornin or whatever ya'll

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (10-31-2003 03:21 PM).]

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-10-31 03:23 PM

Enjoyed the read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2003-10-31 03:24 PM

nite Raph... sleep well...

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2003-10-31 03:27 PM

ah sleep...Good night.
sometimes being mechanical seems to me a good thing, and other times..well, then there are other times...lol. Well done Raph.

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

4 posted 2003-10-31 03:29 PM

just a light oneou don't wanna become completely "mechanic and lifeless"

[This message has been edited by pandonov (10-31-2003 03:30 PM).]

KristieSue

Senior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 1460
PA, US

5 posted 2003-10-31 03:31 PM

...just when I thought I'd heard every way to say good night :-p

Nite nite Raph...

Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail.

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

6 posted 2003-10-31 03:41 PM

raph this was wonderful

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2003-10-31 03:44 PM

Well put Brother.

Get a little sleep for me too and I will keep watch tonight for both of us.

*smile*

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

8 posted 2003-10-31 03:45 PM

to have taken the last... that sounds nice.
But since it can't happen, g'night.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-10-31 04:20 PM

*smile*

I knew you were in there somewhere
even though you think you arent LOOK

i'd have taken my last
long ago
nestled somewhere between
the afterglow

beautiful lines
sleep for me too please
xxoo

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

10 posted 2003-10-31 04:43 PM

Good night, mornin' and top of the day to
ya Raph... Let me think about this mechanic
thing...

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

11 posted 2003-11-05 07:28 PM

wow always amazed, with your words....

i carry your heart with me
i am never without it
you are what a moon has always meant sky of sky
the wonder that keeps stars apart-
e.e.cummings

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

12 posted 2003-11-07 01:48 AM

nestled somewhere between
the afterglow
of a fantastic lay
and the arms
of a deep sleep

Now... how did I miss this? Amazing Bello.

keeping it.

M

fate is not just
whose cooking smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

13 posted 2003-11-07 01:51 AM

ain't it the truth?

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