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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-10-31 10:09 AM



You make me want to cry
the way you shut me out
The way you turned away
Without a word of why

What do you think of me
have you begun to hate
What did you think I would do
when you slammed the door

Do you think I felt more
than what we really had
or was there nothing there
just my pathetic imagination

I should get the hint by now
not one or two but four
have slammed that door
and shut me out for good

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-10-31 11:00 AM


such a sad piece but well written non-the-less
PouringJewels
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2 posted 2003-10-31 02:19 PM


You are not pathetic. Move on to another door. I know it's hard, but I'm trying to keep the doors from closing on me,5 too many times too.
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3 posted 2003-10-31 03:18 PM


Brad~Thanks...

Jewel~I don't think I'm pathetic MOST of the time, but then I start to think that I imagined things - friendships - I guess I am just messed up.  Thanks though...

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

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