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Jaime Fradera
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0 posted 2003-10-31 08:22 AM



The Edge Of Winter
by Jaime Fradera

It is evening.
The sun is setting
In an empty winter sky.
And it is very quiet.
I sit
On A high, precarious exposure,
drinking in the cool night air.
It tastes and smells frosty and sweet,
I can almost eat it.
The air is bracing and Bone-dry
It is tinged
With the bitter paralyzing cold of elevation.
And it tells me of boundless windy heights,
Where people have to wear protective suits
And carry their own oxygen to breathe.
And there seems to be absolutely nothing
Between me and interplanetary space.
And it feels good.

Jaime



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-10-31 08:45 AM


This was awesome, realistic and so so embracing.  
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2 posted 2003-10-31 08:51 AM


BRAVO!!!!
Your best write yet, starlight Jaime.

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Gaia
3 posted 2003-10-31 08:04 PM


back to the top you go
Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2003-10-31 10:53 PM


Jaime~
This is BEAUTIFUL ... it's so good to see you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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