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brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

0 posted 2003-10-30 11:45 PM

are my shoulders
      broad enough
for all of these voices?
             .....like birds on wires.....

I turn my transformer
    right to left
exchanging angels for demons
    and back again

          the weight
of a crowded mind
         drops
    the chin
             to chest
with a CLAP

            exploding wings
       into
              startled sky

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-10-30 11:50 PM

perfect, well worth the wait missed yer words dude

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-10-31 06:24 AM

You're BACK!
Great!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2003-10-31 06:27 AM

     the weight
of a crowded mind
         drops
    the chin
             to chest
with a CLAP

love that...

M

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

4 posted 2003-10-31 07:27 AM

very interesting,
a very unusual subject

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2003-10-31 09:34 AM

saw this cartoon in the newspaper....

2 Love birds sitting on a telephone wire...

the caption read:

"we met on-line"

(awesome closing lines in this poet sir)

Words break into splinters on the pages I write
If I lost you I don't know what I'd do ...
Burn forever where the flame turns blue

David Gray

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-10-31 11:06 AM

my sentiments exactly Bri . . .

sometimes that line needs to be
sprung you know?

to release that clap of chin THUD
*smile*

missed you too Tonto
BooPetalWing
xxoo

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-10-31 11:56 AM

brian

I always enjoy your fresh and original way of writing. Good to read you!

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2003-10-31 12:35 PM

are my shoulders
broad enough
for all of these voices?
.....like birds on wires.....
SNAP (smile. YOU "CLAP". I SNAP. sigh.)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-10-31 01:07 PM

missed your posts...glad you're back

brian sites
Senior Member

since 2002-06-25

Posts 1475
usa

10 posted 2003-10-31 01:22 PM

thank you everyone

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