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Blushing Innuendo's
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Blushing Innuendo's |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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~*~ Where does a poem begin and end running with a vision through a dream lulled to sleep in a thought to be. Taking you over the rainbow soaring on a wing and prayer I don't know, I don't know anymore. I am less cluttered, more resigned nowadays without much to go on, save for poets in love my muse being short lived, fleeting moments at a time. As I stumble over words rewriting the same verse makes my breath catch in the worst way. Oh, to be a poets inspiration blushing hidden innuendo's that makes the heart race. With each carefully chosen word swooning with every tilt of your head touching fingertips to your lips. Like a slip knot holds together generously cutting the slack drawing on the meaning. Colors the mind and decorates the heart waterfalls down a stream letting go of inhibitions. Each stanza, there for the taking until you reach the end and you just know basking in the limelight all your own. ~*~ [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (10-30-2003 07:02 PM).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is really beautifully written, Lori. Even as a few emotions catch in the throat, the word flow remains smooth and fluid. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am less cluttered, more resigned nowadays without much to go on, save for poets in love my muse being short lived, fleeting moments at a time. I couldn't have written it any better Lori... a soft touch you have  M |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Colors the mind and decorates the heart waterfalls down a stream letting go of inhibitions. Each stanza, there for the taking until you reach the end and you just know basking in the limelight all your own. yes it sings........i adore those lines let go of inhibitions, yep sometimes i think i should gather inhititions tho, and fence in the wildwoman in me |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"Oh, to be a poets inspiration blushing hidden innuendo's that makes the heart race." ...you knew you were, didn't you? That's why you wrote those lines! Loved the piece blues... jwesley |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lori~ I can relate well to everyline of this....you wrote this wonderfully, with your style.....hugssss Lauren~ Will the wind ever remember the names |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Kacy~ You're a doll, thank you so much! Maur~ You wanna be my best friend? Thank you for always being here for me. Love you~ Hey girlie~ I'm betting it will never happen, the fencing in part! Nice try though.  I'm so glad you stopped by Michele. Thanks. I was, really? Hmmmm, I'm always the last one to know these things. It's so nice to see you here James, thank you. Lauren~ If only our muse's were a dime a dozen eh? It's slow going working my way out of this rut, but I'm getting there. Oh hark, I see light! Hugs you, and thanks. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
I asked to be a poet's inspiration one time. I got my wish, and it is wonderful. Lovely writing, you. I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! I LOVE YOU! |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Oh, to be a poets inspiration blushing hidden innuendo's that makes the heart race. With each carefully chosen word swooning with every tilt of your head touching fingertips to your lips." yeah....dang, this rocks |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Bluesy this was wonderful... It's all in the eyes of the reader...they see what they want... "if you won't let me fall for you then you won't see the best that I would love to do for you" ~Dido~ [This message has been edited by Susan Caldwell (10-31-2003 10:12 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You know I love reading you! Even your titles are special! "Blushing Innuendos"  HHH Linda  No tricks! Just treats!  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bluesy? is nice to see you singing . . . without a backup band *smile* Much Love beautiful little treats in this one Tweets or was that tweets twick or tweet Oh My I am losing my mind . . . xxoo |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Where does a poem begin and end running with a vision through a dream lulled to sleep in a thought to be. Taking you over the rainbow soaring on a wing and prayer I don't know, I don't know anymore. I am less cluttered, more resigned nowadays without much to go on, save for poets in love my muse being short lived, fleeting moments at a time. As I stumble over words rewriting the same verse makes my breath catch in the worst way. Oh, to be a poets inspiration blushing hidden innuendo's that makes the heart race. With each carefully chosen word swooning with every tilt of your head touching fingertips to your lips. ===================================== I relate to this more than I ever would want to admit...and there was a time when I measured myself by the poetry inspired--my own--and that that was "written for me" ... I guess the moth is jaded or maybe as someone told me the other day... "maybe i outgrew the moth wings" ( more like singed them one time too many)( of my own doing and choice) "Play in the pretty blue flame--expect to get burned...only got myself to blame" as you say... I dont know...I dont know... what I do know is -- there comes a point when you realize...its all just words on a page...just typing...and I want the real damn thing.. not words that are usually spoken by someone hiding behind a screen for someone else hiding behind a screen. And I think I'll shut up the moth rambling and let Jacskon say it so much better than I. "The words had all been spoken And somehow the feeling still wasn't right still we continued on through the night ~~~ Now for me some words come easy But I know that they don't mean that much Compared with the things that are said when lovers touch" J Browne "Late for the Sky" Where does a poem begin and end where ever you make it Lori-girl. (IWIHWT) Words break into splinters on the pages I write If I lost you I don't know what I'd do ... Burn forever where the flame turns blue David Gray [This message has been edited by Janet Marie (10-31-2003 11:24 AM).] |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
As I stumble over words rewriting the same verse makes my breath catch in the worst way. Oh, to be a poets inspiration blushing hidden innuendo's that makes the heart race. Yes Lori! Sometimes we read what is written and sigh and WISH it was written about us.....I LOVED this sweetie! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Lori- This poem was one of your bests, and I've read many by you that truly inspired me. What you write here is so true though. I think you are far from being out of inspiration. When you write, people pay attention, you have the kind of talent that I not only admire but respect. Take care hon. Amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
"Where does a poem begin and end running with a vision through a dream lulled to sleep in a thought to be." . . . a poem all by itself |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hi Temptress~ Thank you for reading and for sharing your wonderful wish come true. SEA~ Thanks for stopping by and reading what I wrote. I've really missed seeing you here. Susan~ Yes, I guess so. Thank you for the wonderful! It means a lot! Linda~ You know that works both ways, I love hearing from you too. Thank you Lady~ Without a back up band?? lolo...only you Tweets. You are such fun, and thank you. JM~ You never ramble, I am deeply moved by your insight and the time you take for me. I know what you mean about being jaded. I don't ever want to become bitter, which explains my weakness for humble pie. Oh yum, cough cough! ....Thank you sincerely, Janet Marie. Donna~ Yep, we can wish and be happy for others, but I think it's human nature to wish for a love like that. Thank you for knowing, and hugs~ Amy~ That was so nice of you to say, thank you for all your good vibes and encouraging words. I hope you know how much they mean to me. Big hugs for you~ Hey Krawdad~ I like a "thought to be" myself... kind of like when we least expect it. Thank you for reading and letting me know you were here. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How I once yearned to be poet's inspire To read black and white words, feel the heat of desire And know it's mine. Now I know that one word's the best poetry If it's sincere and offered only to me All of the time. For pretty words are no more than air If they're written for show and not for care Who needs such rot? I guess some of us must get scorched and burned Before we know what love is and also learn What it is not. I like this very much, Bluesy one... from the title through the last line... hope you don't mind the path my mind took! *S* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...I thought I replied to this when I first read it. Such an honest look into your heart and always written so beautifully. You are complete within yourself, lovely lady! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Lori, this is absolutely gorgeous, sweet friend, and may your heart forever bask in so many poets' inspirations just as I continue to be inspired by you as many others are too! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
suthern lady~ No, I don't mind your take at all. It is the best advice I have heard in a long time..... I think I want to go there and take a long walk down that path. Thank you so much for pointing me in the right direction. Hugs you~ Martie~ Well if I don't hold it together I might miss something good. Thank you for gracing me with your nice reply. Noah~ Thank you, you are much to kind. Truth is, I wish I had more to go on! One of the first lessons I learned about poetry is, I can't force my muse. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (11-01-2003 04:11 PM).] |
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