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Sunshine
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0 posted 2003-10-30 09:38 AM





They say they will watch ~
Monitoring these sun spots.
Monitor sun spots?
If they grow larger, what then?
Will they sing, “Here comes the Sun”?


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1 posted 2003-10-30 09:41 AM


Sunshine
I wouldn't be surprised. LOL

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2 posted 2003-10-30 09:42 AM


"little darlin"


now I have that tune in my head.... neat write Karilea~.....hugssss


Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

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3 posted 2003-10-30 09:45 AM


Thank You! I needed a laugh this morning, and a laugh with substance behind it is a fine thing!

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4 posted 2003-10-30 09:50 AM


ROFL... Only you, lady... only you. *G* And I do love it! *S*
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5 posted 2003-10-30 10:00 AM


Good one Sunshine..."When will we ever learn"?

rambling_words
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6 posted 2003-10-30 12:30 PM


How unique, yes what will they say.

John

Martie
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7 posted 2003-10-30 12:55 PM


Karilea...You are so bright!
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8 posted 2003-10-30 01:02 PM


We could all join in . . .
and go out with a flare!

thanks for the smile

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9 posted 2003-10-30 01:05 PM


cute one
Magicmystery
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10 posted 2003-10-30 02:03 PM


Yep well that's it... I'd better break out my shovel and SPF 2,000,000... LOL

Ever read "The Landing Party" (short story by Arthur C. Clarke?

Sherry


Patricia
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11 posted 2003-10-30 05:39 PM


You are something else, kiddo!

Hugs...
Patricia


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12 posted 2003-10-30 05:55 PM


LOL what I want to know is,
what can we do about them?

you guessed it

nada dang thing but keep our solar sunglasses on and pour on the sunscreen

Magnus
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13 posted 2003-10-30 07:23 PM


They should,  they should!!!
GG
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14 posted 2003-10-30 08:26 PM


they oughta shut their mouths and let poets run the world is what they oughta do! lol


Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
     (blink, breathe, stand, fight)

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15 posted 2003-10-30 09:17 PM


enjoyed
inkedgoddess
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16 posted 2003-10-30 09:40 PM


as a beachbaby of the 60's
how in the world did the sun become poison, how can something so magnificent due us in anyhow?

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-30-2003 09:41 PM).]

jwesley
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17 posted 2003-10-30 09:42 PM


Loved this! And so true....true!

jwesley

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