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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-10-30 09:16 AM



I've been thinking
'bout you and me
the way I feel against
doubts in my mind

You threw me off
so sweet and sincere
such a gentle man
just wanting love

Your arms around me
the words you say
what you bring out in me
the way you turn me on

Against the things I doubt
the fear that I feel deep
trepadation in my heart
makes me wonder what to do

I can't tell you these things
I don't want to hurt you
As much as I could fall for you
I want to run away from you

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

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1 posted 2003-10-30 09:40 AM


This is a fine write....from your heart...which is often the most difficult to convey....thank you for the words....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

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2 posted 2003-10-30 09:43 AM


KristieSue
It happens all the time. Enjoyed the read.

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3 posted 2003-10-31 01:20 PM


"As much as I could fall for you
I want to run away from you"

Sometimes I think it simply isn't valid, isn't real, unless you feel both of those things. That's how it's been for me.

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KristieSue
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4 posted 2003-10-31 04:15 PM


Rose, Seymour, and Ratleader... Thank you...

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

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