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Autumn Remembrances
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Autumn Remembrances |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
As the leaves begin to fall and the summer turns to autumn our thoughts change, as do the leaves and remember times forgotten The days long past, the nights gone by sunsets, sunrises, birthed, and died the memories flood through our minds of all instances passed by Reclining beneath the large oak tree the memories consuming me of what we had and what we lost when we set eachother free I remember everything about how we used to be we were young, and happy, just us, you and me but time turns as the seasons do we grew apart... and i lost you As i lay under the autumn sky, i hope your not in pain because if i ever caused you any hurt i know that i would die. One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
autumn always brings remembering nice write |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Autumn is always a good time for remembering and renewal. Very well done, I enjoyed this piece. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
As the leaves begin to fall and the summer turns to autumn our thoughts change, as do the leaves and remember times forgotten Ahhh, yes, Autumn does indeed bring on an assortment of changes. I enjoyed reading this so much, thank you for this very special poem of yours. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I love autumn and romantic poetry, great combination! enjoyed it! ~ARH |
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Rdz9 Member
since 2003-03-16
Posts 142MT, USA |
Thank you, all. It didn't turn out quite the way i wanted it to, but i can always work on it  . Thanks,Rob One in a sea of millions has the power to change the world... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Reclining beneath the large oak tree the memories consuming me of what we had and what we lost when we set each other free ~*~ Not everyone can accept change. Then we have to do the best for ourselves, as well as for others. Thanks for the read. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Rob, this is very heartfelt, sweet friend, the autumn can always bring back so memories and make you laugh slower and think deeper! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rob, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
It's great to see your writing again.... Autumn is my favorite season and it often makes me sentimental and thoughtful too. This is wonderful poetry.....I hope to see more!!!! Bridgette "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful piece of work here Rob. Autumn and the changes it brings...wonderful. Hugs~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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