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rambling_words
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since 2003-10-29
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London, Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2003-10-30 12:45 PM


It is raining on the streets of London
Monday tears for yesterdays bombs
American soldiers dead in Baghdad City
red, white and blue stars falling over Washington
heroes rising out of the dust
angels descending out of the sky
winter feathers to heal summer wounds
galaxies of other planets spin in their disbelief
our world, our war, our way
circumstances can never be forgotten but circumstances can never be forgiven
in a just society
revenge is the enemy of the free
it tears us apart
from sea to sea and from town to town
races of different faces praying to different Gods for the same cause
war leads the news into our homes
guns lead the bullets into our schools
the dead lay in crimson puddles of other pains
the head lay in muddy graves of other rains
unmarked and unknown
names on monuments and games on computers
strategic targets and smart bombs
what is so smart about dead children
what if they were ours
what if they are ours
only time will plot the course of our destination
It is raining on the streets of your town
never again tears for once again promises
dead sons and widowed daughters
orphaned children and shattered innocence
black, blue and purple bruises spreading over skin
villians bleeding our hearts
devils stealing our souls
I will not be divided by religion or politics
my life is worth no more than the life of another person.


© Copyright 2003 John Raeside - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-10-30 02:18 AM


Wow! That packs a punch! What a powerful piece of poetry! ~ and so rich in imagery ~ and message!

Warm hugs,
Earth Angel

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-10-30 12:01 PM


from sea to sea and from town to town
races of different faces praying to different Gods for the same cause
war leads the news into our homes
guns lead the bullets into our schools
the dead lay in crimson puddles of other pains
the head lay in muddy graves of other rains
unmarked and unknown

~*~

I am often told to write of what is "out there"...
but when others do it, better than I,
all I can do, is try to find some silver thread
to line that which is already wrought.

Well done, Sir.

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