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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-10-29 08:18 PM



I think I love you
I thought while waking
to find you gazing lovingly
watching my chest rise and fall

I know I need you
I decided later on
while we walked hand in hand
along a path of trees

I really want you
I cried as we parted
each going our separate ways
to finish our day's end

Now I sit here thinking
knowing I haven't reached love yet
but I do need you, want you
and see a love in our future

So til then please hold me tight
be patient with me and our love
and when that day comes slow but sure
it will be our full heart's desire

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

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mytuesdaywishes
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1 posted 2003-10-29 09:46 PM


pretty...and idealistic, but pretty...

i think that it's brainless to assume that making changes to your window's view will gain a new perspective.

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2 posted 2003-10-30 02:12 AM


Hey KristieSue. This is the first thing I've seen from you in some time. Nice job. Love is always worth the effort of a little time. You go girl!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-10-30 08:44 AM


You know Kristie . . .
this is the most insightful write I have seen from you
*smile*
it comes when your not looking
so dont pay attention
xxoo

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4 posted 2003-10-30 09:25 AM


Tuesday Thank you...a bit too idealistic for my brain :-)

EV Thanks...hopefully I'll be able to spit some out in the next week or so...

Sue Thanks, I appreciate it.  Scary as hell, but it came.

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

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