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For Lack Of A Desparate, Poignant Title
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For Lack Of A Desparate, Poignant Title |
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Kesiv New Member
since 2003-10-29
Posts 4 |
I have danced for So long, so very long; My legs keen mutely, feet weep, And I, finally, beg a chair Hollow smiles Dressed in fine thread, Play tender chords To hopeful hearts The hour is late, and The band is instrumental; That subtle killing floor Beckons to all, even me |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, Welcome to Passions! I hear the music underlying this potent write. I hope you find yourself most welcome, and let us know if you ever have any questions. Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Welcome to Passions! I enjoyed your first post and look forward to many more! Please check your email for a special greeting from all of us! Susan "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Kesiv New Member
since 2003-10-29
Posts 4 |
Viewed objectively, posting publicly and mispelling Desperate is truly striving for mediocrity. Thanx for the reply. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Witty...grins |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Very nice write. Of course, it made me think of the old Skip James tune "Hard time killin' floor blues" Hmmm, you could have well been mispelling "disparate"....Such is the nature of poetry, eh? and uhm, "glamour" can also mean enchantment, or magic as well. Thanks for the read and welcome to Pip. |
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whispering wind Junior Member
since 2003-08-18
Posts 45 |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Great first post. Keep them coming. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
   (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a wonderful debut that truly had a poignant stomp to it, quite a hammer to the floor I might add! This is excellent, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet Kesiv, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your fabulous poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you!' Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
ah desperate despair... such is poetry! Love it, look forward to more Welcome to the blue pages err.. I guess they're orange right now. But soon, yes, soon... Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The hour is late, and The band is instrumental; Oh yes, and welcome to Passions!! I'll be looking to read you. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... an interesting blend of imagery and metaphor that I enjoyed.. |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Welcome and wonderful job! Ya know what they say. Curiosity salted the snail. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Much enjoyed your entrance post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Time has cast a spell on you, |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Boy do we have a load of new talent here! Beautiful stuff. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
enjoyed the dance of this write disparate or desperate, both make equal sense to me LOL WELCOME! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kesiv~ Welcome to Passions~ I enjoyed the subtle nuances of your penning~ Look forward to you sharing more~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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