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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-29 11:25 AM


Fog

did it
occur to you
that when
our skin brushed
part of you
was left behind


"Tough times never last...tough people do." carol gardner

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
icebox
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in the shadows
1 posted 2003-10-29 11:34 AM


Ahhh...the poetic forensics of love.

Perfect!

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2003-10-29 11:57 AM



Oh wow...
KEEPING THIS ONE!!!!

littlewing
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New York
3 posted 2003-10-29 12:04 PM


YES YES and YES indeed
damn your hitting them out of the
park here Helen
xxoo

bslicker
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state of mind
4 posted 2003-10-29 01:13 PM


yep

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Amature2
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5 posted 2003-10-29 04:35 PM


1slick_lady = 1Awesome_Lady, this Masterpiece is a keeper. Very nice.

[This message has been edited by Amature2 (10-29-2003 04:42 PM).]

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
6 posted 2003-10-29 04:40 PM


You never fail to blow me away.

Keeper indeed.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

vandana
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7 posted 2003-10-29 05:18 PM


liked it
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
8 posted 2003-10-29 11:44 PM


sighs
SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~
9 posted 2003-10-30 01:23 AM


This was a beautiful fragrance...wow
Terri~

Darren
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10 posted 2003-10-30 02:31 AM


I was aware of it, but what surprised most was the part I left behind.
passing shadows
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displaced
11 posted 2003-10-30 04:27 AM


you are the queen of the short poem
James_A_Fraser
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Out Making Anticlines
12 posted 2003-10-31 02:51 PM


I find it hard to imagine being unaware of that particular interchange....



~~J

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