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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2003-10-29 07:20 AM

A Tear of Desire

A tear has slipped into my heart
And ripped away a little part
Within the acid of desire
I have lit my soul afire.

I thought that it would never come
But when it did it struck me dumb
And I accepted every bit
And now I can’t extinguish it

There is a hole within my soul
And only she can make it whole
For I am tied within my vows
And only God can more allow

In anguish and in sorrows vent
I cannot stay the holes extent
Nor can I open up the door
To say the end of evermore

Another vend another bend
Who can say what would the end.

Elizabeth Santos
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since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2003-10-29 07:33 AM

Words of a gentleman's tender heart
Very beautiful, dear sir
A love poem of the loveliest kind

Take care
Liz

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2003-10-29 07:42 AM

I thought that it would never come
But when it did it struck me dumb
And I accepted every bit
And now I can’t extinguish it

Beautiful words of love, ones of which I am so very familiar with and sometimes wish I could put out the fire....
very well done Sey, morning hugs doll!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-10-29 07:52 AM

Elizabeth,
Thank you my dear and I try.
Stay well
Sy

Gentle Spirit,
Glad you enjoyed the read.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

4 posted 2003-10-29 08:03 AM

A tear has slipped into my heart
And ripped away a little part
Within the acid of desire
I have lit my soul afire.

I thought that it would never come
But when it did it struck me dumb
And I accepted every bit
And now I can’t extinguish it
=============================

And I the moth understand your claim ...
I, forever drawn to the fire and the flame.

thats why I wear flameproof mascara for my *winkies* LOL

Your rhymes divine slow time and blow me mothy mind, me sweet Sy-babes.

You're the color of the sky reflected in each store-front window pane ...
You're the whispering and the sighing of my tires in the rain.

J. Browne

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2003-10-29 08:07 AM

JM,
I thank you, Randy thanks you and winkie winkies to you.
WWRS

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

6 posted 2003-10-29 08:35 AM

The flame of love burns in you, Sy.

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2003-10-29 08:36 AM

scorpio
But the fuel of life is running low. LOL

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-10-29 08:41 AM

aww Sy what a beautiful man to write such devotion:

And I accepted every bit
And now I can’t extinguish it

There is a hole within my soul
And only she can make it whole

yep I know this well
Missed you here
xxoo

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2003-10-29 08:51 AM

You have venue, you have ways
to set your sighs upon the stage
we sit in wait of all you say,
and applaud a most temperate rage.

~*~

In dreams, all things are possible.
Smile, Sy, it's the only thing we do well.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

10 posted 2003-10-29 08:54 AM

littlewing,
You are sweet.

Sunshine,
And you are right once again.

wranx
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since 2002-06-07

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Moved from a shack to a barn

11 posted 2003-10-29 09:46 AM

The fine quill, sir...Would be in your hand.

Ed

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2003-10-29 09:58 AM

enjoyed

Greeneyes

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since 2000-09-09

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In Your Poetic Mind

13 posted 2003-10-29 10:02 AM

Such tears of desire....

enjoyed this....much!
Lauren~

Will the wind ever remember the names
it has blown in the past with
its crutch its old age and its widsom
it whispers no this won't be the last

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2003-10-29 10:09 AM

wranx,
A gentleman and a scholar thank you Ed.

vandana
Thank you dear.

Lauren,
Thank you love.

EvocativeVerse2
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since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

15 posted 2003-10-29 10:16 AM

Bravo Seymour. But then you knew I was going to say that. I love this piece and the amount of feeling you put into it. Thank-you for posting this. Love to read your stuff.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

16 posted 2003-10-29 10:26 AM

EvocativeVerse2
You are kind, thank you.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

17 posted 2003-10-29 11:47 AM

I thought that it would never come
But when it did it struck me dumb
And I accepted every bit
And now I can’t extinguish it

Oh my, Seymour...do I ever know this feeling.
I don't think that I could extinquish the love and fire
that my Honey-love has put here, even if I wanted to. LOL
Thanks for your love poem this morning, my friend.

Hugs to you,

Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

18 posted 2003-10-29 12:24 PM

Ethel,
Thank you so much for the read and reply.

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

19 posted 2003-10-29 01:01 PM

This is so well done,Sy. Enjoyed it very much..gentle smile

Magicmystery
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since 2002-02-13

Posts 821
Windsor, Ontario, Canada

20 posted 2003-10-29 01:21 PM

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There is a hole within my soul
And only she can make it whole
For I am tied within my vows
And only God can more allow
------------------------------

On, Seymour, I do know this feeling.
Well and Sadly written.

Lets hope she brings the number 2 silk and the skills of a surgeon.

Well Done... This one is going into my library.

Sherry

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

21 posted 2003-10-29 01:39 PM

Logan
Thank you for the read and like.

Sherry
You are a dear and thank you.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

22 posted 2003-10-29 07:41 PM

Good evening, T-Man!

You can turn your fantasy into reality in your nightly dreamscape world...

Sweet dreams,

EA

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

23 posted 2003-10-29 08:39 PM

Earth Angel
It is what I try to do. LOL

Deb Lynne
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Where blue skies meet blue ocean

24 posted 2003-10-29 10:06 PM

Your writing is fast becoming one of the first I search for....simply beautiful.

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

25 posted 2003-10-29 11:01 PM

Hello Seymour

Your words were as smooth as silk and nearly rolled off the page.

Take care........Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

26 posted 2003-10-30 04:50 AM

Very Touching~!~

I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~

Much Luv,
~!~"Trina"~!~

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

27 posted 2003-10-30 07:43 AM

Suetang
You are a dear, thank you.

Deb,
That is a pleasure to hear, thank you.

S1nfully,
A sweet comment. Thank you.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

28 posted 2003-10-31 12:50 PM

A tear has slipped into my heart
And ripped away a little part
Within the acid of desire
I have lit my soul afire.

OH that!!

You're all heart here, Sy~
Just lovely. *sniff*

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

29 posted 2003-10-31 01:09 AM

what a beautiful heart you have dear sir

And oh what beautiful words.
This is love, honest love...

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

30 posted 2003-10-31 07:26 AM

BluesSerenade
And you are a sweetheart.

Alyssa,
Thank you for the wonderful words.

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