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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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The magic is in your eyes, your touch, your scent It plays upon your finger tips the creases in your palms and the sun dappling your golden mane as a fallen leaf not dying but rebirthed into a new season tossed from its berth riding the wind testing time and settling upon the ground |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
That he is, Sue... The Green man. (The green man with fur.) (and wings) he MUST be magic! Hugs you! love you.  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesomely said! |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
isn't this time of year beautiful? just as this is... definitely. Love it! Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Suzie, you know that I'm loving these good loving poems the two of you are writing. Just keep them up.  And, this..... yep, LittleOne, you know that I know this, too.... but from my Honey-Love, of course!! The magic is in your eyes, your touch, your scent It plays upon your finger tips Hugs to you, my friend, Ethel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, I'm liking the songs AND the new photos! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
very wise and thoughtful words, very perceptive of the whole aura of the guy, id say |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
He is a pretty cool leaf! And you are a rare tree of life and nourishment. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I love the new photo Sue, and I knew I would love this before I even clicked on the poem! As usual hon, poetic perfection! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
littlewing A lovely write, good read. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
the sun dappling your golden mane as a fallen leaf not dying but rebirthed into a new season tossed from its berth riding the wind testing time and settling upon the ground'''' this is so lovely....sigh~ love the new picture too....it's refreshing to see love grow...  hugssss Lauren~ Will the wind ever remember the names |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God Karen yes indeed . . . you know as well as I do LMAO he was wonderin bout the flying monkeys I explained as best as I could lol love you too and yes . . he was sang about once by Heart *wink* Thank you Dixie! God yes Alyssa I adore Fall and here in NY it is just beautiful! Thank you Aww Ethel, thank you so much, did you ever think I would be writing such happy? you said honey-love lmao reminds me of something, ask Ed aww thank you Kari - so so much Ed took that px! Wow Michele - yes, I guess I do , I didnt see that - makes me feel so good that YOU see that too thank you aww Kacy you are so awesome, a cool leaf indeed and me? a tree? mann THAT is a huge compliment to us both thank you so much Thank you Donna so very much and thanks for the compliment , Ed took that px! such a sweet soul you are Hey Sy I have missed you thank you so much Hey Lauren thank you so very much sigh yes . . . is good to see you reading me and yes indeed Thanks guys xxoo |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
G'morning Baby You are just FULL of poetry, aren't you? Better n' better too! (I know, I'm partial...But it's true) Love you Susie! *great big cat that ate the bird smile* Umm, that was meant to be read as ~ "I'm wearing a great big "cat that ate the bird" smile (hmm, that's just as bad huh? Sheesh!) "In looking Northward, I see a light" [This message has been edited by wranx (10-29-2003 02:16 PM).] |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi littlewing. Love the poem and the new picture. Very well done! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Morning Baby . . . listenin to POCO where are you sleepyhead? Thank you ahahahah Hey now be careful . . . there Love you too Eddie . . . thank you baby Thank you so much V! Hey Verse , very cool and thank you so much Thanks guys xxoo |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Excellent! Thank you for sharing. Place your hand gently upon the living Oak, and it will talk with you; turn and walk away continuing your path, its spirit follows you; become burdened and distracted by the stream of life, and it waits for you. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ready for the bizarre? Your lines here: "as a fallen leaf not dying but rebirthed into a new season tossed from its berth" Seem to answer these lines that I wrote yesterday but didn't finish: I watch leaves tumble to their death Noting their colorful descent Wondering why they don’t protest Or maybe I just don’t hear their resist hmmmmmmmm... Sue...beautiful writing and everything you two have been writing paints a beautiful picture of what it is all about... "if you won't let me fall for you |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
It is obvious to me that love does see every single thing though different eyes, and that is a good ting SusieQ.  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Sue, this is gorgeous, sweet friend, know that the seasons will always cycle and a leaf never dies but is only brought back to life and love does just that! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Beautifully said littleone and the pic, hmm sexy. Maree fate is not just |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Icey? you always make me feel comforted, for this, I thank you, m'friend what a beautiful response Thank you Susan and My God yes that is freaky . . cool though . . ok lemme go find that beauty you wrote now . . . A good ting indeed Sharon *smile* Tanka . . . and yes truly My God it does Noah yes indeed the cycle mann you said it always a lovely response for me thank you Maree *smiling* glad you like my picture A yetifriend of ours took it and thank you littleone xxoo Thanks guys xxoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You see just everything in him and the comparison to the Oak makes him eternal. Beautiful and touching words. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank you Margherita I have missed you so much xxoo |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
geez, this is so pretty, It's like watching someone, watching someone else, and reading that person's thoughts.... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Perfection |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sue?...sorry I'm so late in getting to this. I've been slacking big time and finally playing 'catch up'..or trying to. Anyway...yes...you've described him perfectly... but then you already knew that...smile Simply beautiful, sis Love it...love YOU... When the power of love overcomes the love of power the world will know peace. -Jimi Hendrix [This message has been edited by vlraynes (11-04-2003 03:35 AM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Thank youi Susan, God that was beautiful Hey Meg, where have you been? thank you Vicky, is ok, I know you are busy and I know you know, ya know? Love you . . . Thanks guys xxoo |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
this reminds me of a song by seth bernard called the bellies of the leaves , ahh yes leaves a pleasent thought in my mind ...another touching read , miss ya lata : ) wolfy |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
miss you too wolfy thank you xxoo |
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