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You Gave The Poetry of Life to Me
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You Gave The Poetry of Life to Me |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Living fast, living hard In this world I walk alone Momentary connections seem To turn my heart to stone I remember the simple times As a child living in grace And struggled as I became Part of the modern race Untouched by the passion Hoping for what may be I wore the mask of uncaring Until you gave the poetry of life to me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sweeeeeeeeeet! and you were just waiting to happen lady!  You give back all that you described and more. *heartfelt hugs* (I'd offer merlot kisses but you don't drink.  )Oh what the hell, live a little.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Sharon? you have no idea what this means to me! YES indeed the poetry of life My God, I have just discovered myself this is beautiful *smiling for you, at you* xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (10-29-2003 01:42 AM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And in that giving, much was stripped away revealing a poet of heart. Thank goodness for that, Sharon... thank you for this. |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sharon~ This is very touching.... Lauren~ Will the wind ever remember the names |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
I sure am glad I stopped in to read some today. I love this. alan |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Untouched by the passion Hoping for what may be I wore the mask of uncaring Until you gave the poetry of life to me Sharon, this is beautiful. I know about "the mask of uncaring", too. Hugs to you, sweet lady  Ethel |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all for your kind words!!! Sometimes these things write themselves and this one did. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Well I am sure glad you found a way to strip away the layers to become who you now are through poetry. We all like what we see very, very much. It wrote itself? Kewl, auto poetry, give me the recipe for that potion will you? |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Wow, So simple and soooo sweet. Loved your write. Someone's pretty lucky it sounds. Sadelite |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Sharon I simply adore this! So much truth found in your words. Well done. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The last verse really grabbed me. Poetry is so many things, and a very special gift in itself. Nice writing Ms. devine~ |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
yes.... I now understand this feeling too smile very nice Sharon |
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