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Haunt of thought
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Haunt of thought |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Confounding this haunt of thought if only you had fought with whispered breath ‘please, don’t go’ tender sigh ‘I love you so’ spilled emotions, emanating would have held lives in changing a wisp of fate rearranging, destiny’s plan instead remaining ‘what could have been’ in times of ‘I remember, when’ ~SEA~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey Sue! and yes, EXACTLY! it's those inner voices that do the real hauntings, don't they? and nodding agreement that it is always what I didn't do that haunts me the most. (and I've got quite a rap sheet too!  )with winks and hugs, Sea-sue.  |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
a wisp of fate rearranging, destiny’s plan instead remaining ‘what could have been’ in times of ‘I remember, when’ Deep~!~We All Feel Like This In One Way Or Another~!~ I'd Rather Be Hated For Who I Am Then Loved For What I'm Not~!~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ok this got me good ‘please, don’t go’ tender sigh ‘I love you so’ that px these words , my life one year ago today God I think that is me sitting up there 'cept I didnt have an umbrella *smile* ohh this does ache so Sue but beautifully xxoo |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
SEA, it is good to read your works again. This is a beauty. It says a lot in very few words. alan |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh, do I ever know this, Sue..... with whispered breath ‘please, don’t go’ tender sigh ‘I love you so’ We both feel this each time we must part again.  Hugs, lady  Ethel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah good. You're REALLY back...I know, because this is the second day at SEA! Hugs you! |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh,Susan, and THIS is why I always love reading your verses, for you are such a master at plucking the heart strings..very well done, but then you always do...very gentle smile |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh yeah...this one tore me up  I like it when they do that |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent title....wonderful poetry. Eric |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
hugs my friend... I think the haunts you describe are understood by many many people... It is SO nice to see your name back on the pages, and to be able to read you again.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Exactly....you summed up so much of what I feel lately...very well done Susan! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is lovely...yes, if only...James |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
only if.... then things would have been altogether different. but it never happens, you choose the best options you have at any particular time. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sea girl- if only indeed...this was a brilliant write, showing your heart clearly as you do so well. hope to talk to you soon. take care. amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Very nicely done! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssssss) The voice within can always be the most haunting thing, sweet friend, I hope all is well as you deserve stillness of heart always! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Without 'knowing' ... you knew~ This one reaches in and squeezes my heart~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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