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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2003-10-29 12:02 PM


There is a lesser lesson learned--
secondary gods to hear.
There is a method of concern--
as madness charts his way to here.
There are advisors in my mind,
murmering a poison's chant.
Ghosts of all I've left behind;
and every deed I've done--recant.
I do not understand such guilt--
transforming dust into silk silt.
I do not understand myself--
transforming heaven into hell.
Voices chanting words unspeak
as the gods demand the floor.
I feel the bleed internally
and curse them as I beg for more.


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wranx
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1 posted 2003-10-29 12:06 PM


This was from just before my time here witch...But can still see the ever present pensing.

Hugs

~yeti

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-10-29 12:13 PM


i also
SEA
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with you
3 posted 2003-10-29 12:14 PM


"There are advisors in my mind,
murmering a poison's chant.
Ghosts of all I've left behind;"


I don't remember this one from before, but I will now!!

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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4 posted 2003-10-29 01:55 AM


Good God . .  self-torture
Mann . .  glad you reposted this
knocked me off my chair
I know this well . . .
xxoo

Logan
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5 posted 2003-10-29 01:21 PM


Ahhh, gentle one. But there is always the other side of you where smiles bring sunshine. A very wonderful write though, but then, I always look for one when I see your posts...very gentle smile
Edder
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6 posted 2003-11-02 10:42 AM


and the battle rages...will it ever end? sometimes i wonder
brian sites
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7 posted 2003-11-02 11:27 AM


smile

I know this one...

hey, we sing in harmony!

you take it easy on yourself

pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
8 posted 2003-11-02 12:09 PM


nice indeed, good stuff
Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2003-11-02 03:50 PM




(smiles) Oh Karen, this is beautiful, sweet friend, there truly are demigods among us all, but they don't have certifications and thus they just burn away after they come on in! (big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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