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wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn

0 posted 2003-10-28 11:10 PM


She awoke with me
still hot from lovers sleep
laying in wreckage of the night

And gathered to us
the littered remains
of our lovemaking

Finding a song or two
left unsung


"In looking Northward, I see a light"

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the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-10-28 11:11 PM


This is so romantic

Cold hands means a warm heart

Martie
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2 posted 2003-10-28 11:12 PM


Ed...and you sing of it so sweetly.
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3 posted 2003-10-28 11:30 PM


ahem...
such sensual softness

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-10-29 01:31 AM


You came to me
awash in silhouette
of moonlit hue

my incubus

tip toeing . . . ssshhhhh
silent reprieve
solitude of night
broken, shattered
Autumn breath,
a wisp of air
leaves
with the chill of night

Within your embrace
I am where I belong, my love
Running like a child
to the place of my birth


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
5 posted 2003-10-29 06:29 AM


Such wonderful songs!
Duncan
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6 posted 2003-10-29 08:34 AM


I think there's something in the air this fall...
Ratleader
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7 posted 2003-10-29 09:19 AM


They don't really create new parts of us, but they most certainly help us find all of what's there already.

Happy day to you sir (a wish already fulfilled it seems)...

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vandana
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8 posted 2003-10-29 10:01 AM


enjoyed
Goldenrose
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9 posted 2003-10-29 10:08 AM


Beautiful sentiments of love between you two...thanks for sharing it with us....

Goldenrose.

''Each soul is potentialy divine..the goal is to manifest that divinity''

KristieSue
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10 posted 2003-10-29 07:45 PM


how sweet and romantic *sigh*

Ya know what they say.  Curiosity salted the snail.

garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-11-05 02:02 AM


Beautiful music you two play together....
love ya'll.
Ethel

(Hey, LittleOne)  

Dark Angel
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12 posted 2003-11-05 04:05 AM


You do Bro, sing it beautifully.

Maree

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


PouringJewels
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13 posted 2003-11-05 05:28 AM


Yuck....You are my brother. I wish I had your talent for words, But yuck.
Earth Angel
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14 posted 2003-11-05 09:29 AM


Your song, her song ~ may you sing in harmony forever long...
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