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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-28 10:16 PM


cold
bitter
acid smile.
i can close my eyes
and smile back
or leave them open
and
dissolve


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Aenimal
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1 posted 2003-10-28 10:21 PM


yeah buffers..the family had alot of buffers..

sorry watched godfather for the umpteenth time though i think coppola's career sleeps witht he fishes after the 3rd one..what the hell was he thinking..oops sorry i'm rambling am i rambling? yes definite ramble..remember sleep? neither do i

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with you
2 posted 2003-10-28 10:43 PM


"i can close my eyes
and smile back
or leave them open
and
dissolve"

wow...striking a cord....

KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
3 posted 2003-10-30 06:21 PM


!BUMP!

Loved this...
You have this thing you do with words...
Dunno what it is yet..
But it's incredible.

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4 posted 2003-10-31 02:36 PM


Great stuff. It's time we had more strongly-written poetry in PIP. Glad to see it.

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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
5 posted 2003-10-31 02:41 PM


thx Ratleader, and thx to all of you reading my stuff, i feel complete
Edder
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6 posted 2003-11-02 10:55 AM


i take option 1, but then i've always been a coward at this sort of thing. you leave me thinking...
littlewing
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7 posted 2003-11-02 11:08 AM


Oh My . . .
yes keep them closed and look
from the other eye please
I adore this
Welcome. sorry I missed your entrance
xxoo

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8 posted 2003-11-02 11:24 AM


oh, I do understand this one too well

it's smarter to keep some protective
'eyedrops' handy rather than close your eyes


a good write!

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9 posted 2003-11-02 12:39 PM


damn
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10 posted 2003-11-02 03:22 PM




(sigh) Keep them closed, and break them gently! (big hugggssssssss) This is wonderful writing, sweet friend, this certainly vaults the buffer, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Petre, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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11 posted 2003-11-02 03:27 PM


pandonov....this packs a punch!
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