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PsychoticBunni
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis

0 posted 2003-10-28 09:01 PM



now life is spent
in pregnant waiting
for you to move
to hold me close

I tremble quietly
You still stand there
Just kiss me
And take me
To see the stars

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

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Atrum Mortalis
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since 2003-10-28
Posts 9

1 posted 2003-10-28 09:02 PM


interesting...cryptic..i like

KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
2 posted 2003-10-28 09:09 PM


Yup. I know this well.
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-10-28 09:12 PM


Very nice...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Time has cast a spell on you,
  So you won't ever forget me~

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