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iwannarime22
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since 2003-10-25
Posts 19
Rogers, Arkansas

0 posted 2003-10-28 08:46 PM


My friend, I need you now-
Please take me by the hand.
Stand by me in my hour of need,
Take time to understand.

Take my hand, dear friend,
And lead me from this place.
Chase away my doubts and fears,
Wipe the tears from off my face.

Friend, I cannot stand alone.
I need your hand to hold,
The warmth of your gentle touch
In my world that's grown so cold.

Please be a friend to me
And hold me day by day.
Because with your loving hand in mine,
I know we'll find the way.


© Copyright 2003 Kim Pockat - All Rights Reserved
KoKo
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since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
1 posted 2003-10-28 08:48 PM



PsychoticBunni
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis
2 posted 2003-10-28 08:50 PM


ok! I'll be ur friend. lol

Meg- And the Texan pushed the Mexican out of the plane and screamed, "Long live the ALAMO!!!!!!!!!"

EagleScorpion
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since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
3 posted 2003-11-12 10:19 PM


poems like this are so cute and there is much truth in these thoughts you have wrought.

friends may be the only ones to keep you sane!! (so pick good ones!!! )

WildPoet
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since 2003-11-10
Posts 205
California
4 posted 2003-11-12 10:23 PM


Very smooth, nice flow. Makes me want to help!

Thanks

WildPoet

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5 posted 2003-11-12 10:33 PM




(smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, know you always have friends in your heart and we are all blessed to be your friends here in this poetry family, yay, I send angel friendship hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kim, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

SharaRose
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since 2003-07-19
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Somewhere out there~
6 posted 2003-11-13 03:43 AM


Sweet.
Terri~

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2003-11-13 03:44 AM


it would be hard for any friend to deny such a beautiful request
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